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I'm guessing he already has the chapters written out ahead of time. My opinion it needs editing
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I think it is fine.
It gets the point across(aka showing that they'll be more chapters with displaced soon) and gives it a story.
It is fine as is.
Keep up the work and don't be one of those guys who says "I lost interest" or "I am gonna make a different story and forget about this one."
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I've seen the spyro displaced b4 but not directly with dark spyro or he was literally reborn as a baby spyro. It's rare though
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I do not have them written ahead of time
I don't mean to sound mean but you should get a proofreader all the spelling mistakes are talking me out of the story. Don't get me wrong I love the story so far but it's hard to read
I hope he get a summening warning. You dont wannt to get summend while you lay your eggs after dinner
Not 10 Years old and already extreamly capable Pretty sure Celestia might start taking him up as a unoffical pupil. Might help Twilight and Spike via letter friendship?
Discord would make a nice Displaced Handler. He was always a kind of Q style teacher. This introduction for other dispaced needs to be updated ones a year if you ask me. Social visit of the Handler plus up to date looks/picture.
This was a awesome chapter I'm happy his family is ok.
Good chapter. After some edits a great chapter. Mainly for reading comfort
I'm sucked into the story, and I want to know what happens. Especially when NMM and the Mane 6 show up. But gah, the grammar is killing me on the inside.......
Edit: Just read a little bit of the later chapters, and it seems the grammar does get better. That cinches it, I'm gonna keep reading
Should have happend years ago...
That chapter works for me partially. Looking forward to implementing it
The weapons out of magic will be a no go for me
Magic armor on the other claw... 👍
Actually Spyro is a welp, or wormling? Depends on the lore origin... perhaps a cup?
Where did the knowledge to be efficiently use their weapons come from?
Didn't the maid joined him? ...
But that was his intention all along
He give away the story all important story... now we can skip reading it
I hate spoilers
There is a special place for storyline spelling people in Tarterus
Alternative he just returns in a few years time?
Would not have to be sued for fraud after all.
Multiverse fraud police is a bitch with sharp teeth going for the ankles