Starlight: Shadow Bolt!

After transferring here from a small school in Sire's Hollow, Starlight takes the chance to begin opening up more, nothing can go wrong. In this school full of cut throat academic competition. Nothing at all...

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Ri2

Ri2 #1 · Jul 26th, 2019 · 2 · ·

Heh, that was fun. Glad Starlight fell in with a...nice? crowd.

WittyNameTFM

WittyNameTFM #2 · Jul 26th, 2019 · 1 · ·

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I suppose its a better crowd than others.

Thanks for reading :D

Quinch

Quinch #3 · Jul 26th, 2019 · 2 · ·

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Heh, let's call them intense. I do like how their characters in EqG turned out to be a lot less flat than they could have been.

Nice story, by the way.

WittyNameTFM

WittyNameTFM #4 · Jul 26th, 2019 · 1 · ·

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Me too! Which is why I kinda give them more than just the CPA equivalent to the Rainbooms. "Everyone has their own issues" is something I say. So each of the girls having their struggles makes them feel more real. Like you could run into someone who has Sour's problems...and know just how hard it affects them when they accidentally snap at someone.

I'm glad you enjoyed it, sorry for the slight tangent.

The Sleepless Beholder

The Sleepless Beholder #5 · Sep 21st, 2020 · 1 · ·

This was great, and it left me wanting more.

I liked the look to the inner workings of CPA, and how the, as you called it, the CPA equivalent of the Rainbooms, act inside it.

The "linking plaza" had me cackling. It was the first band I liked.

Also the 'Fuck...she's cute.' was adorable

Is there a prequel to this one, or should I just keep going with the release dates?

WittyNameTFM

WittyNameTFM #6 · Sep 21st, 2020 · 2 · ·

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For the starlight in CPA? This is the first mention of her outside of my other Startrix stuff. But she does show up in the later fics. I havent given starlight her own fic in a while now that I think about it.

The Sleepless Beholder