Princess Celestia was quite clearly overworked lately. Twilight just had to find a way to help. Unfortunately, the only answer she found was a bit odd.
Chrysalis is beaten. Her invasion of Canterlot? Failed. Her hive? Scattered to the winds. The future of her people? Bleak, grim, and hopeless. But change is in the air, and something is calling Chrysalis north, to the birthplace of the changelings.
The space race is on, and Chrysalis is determined to win it. With an earth pony test pilot and a hive full of brave-but-dim changelings, can she be the first pony on the moon? Inspired by Kerbal Space Program.
At first it was great, then it got better, and at the end ... it came to a screeching halt. Yes, they're school-age fillies, but becoming friends that fast? In my opinion, it would've been more believable for Tiara to respond with something like "how bout a truce?" or something. She still hasn't apologized or anything, so ... maybe a continuation showing the progression toward apology? The friendship report was a nice touch, but ... seems out of place, considering Twilight wasn't there during all of this. Mind, these are just suggestions, and should be taken as such.
Awww. : 3
Cute idea; nice execution.
cute idea, and nice work with Tiara, i like her
Interesting.
At first it was great, then it got better, and at the end ... it came to a screeching halt. Yes, they're school-age fillies, but becoming friends that fast?
In my opinion, it would've been more believable for Tiara to respond with something like "how bout a truce?" or something. She still hasn't apologized or anything, so ... maybe a continuation showing the progression toward apology?
The friendship report was a nice touch, but ... seems out of place, considering Twilight wasn't there during all of this.
Mind, these are just suggestions, and should be taken as such.
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I agree. It shocked me too.
But still: I like it.