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Pixie Breeze's Story

Hi! This where I'll be publishing my OC, Pixie Breeze, full story. From her birth to where she is in her life now. Some constructive criticism and feedback would be greatly appreciated!

Thanks for reading!
Pixie has an Instagram account too! @pixie.breeze

Chapters (3)

Ch. 1- Welcome to the World · 30th Jun 2019 · 717 words
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Ch. 2- The First Day · 3rd Jul 2019 · 517 words
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Ch. 3- I Need Your Help · 8th Jul 2019 · 569 words
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Rainbowderp20_12

Rainbowderp20_12 #1 · Jul 8th, 2019 · · · Ch. 3- I Need Your Help ·

Its an interesting story so far. I like it except the lack of length in the chapters. Otherwise its a really great story in my opinion.

pixiebreeze

pixiebreeze #2 · Jul 8th, 2019 · · · Ch. 3- I Need Your Help ·

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Thanks! Yea, I'm trying to work on the length and expand on my ideas more. I'm so used to writing this story Instagram where there's a character limit. So i can only write so much there. It'll take me a bit to get used to the potential longer chapters.

Rainbowderp20_12

Rainbowderp20_12 #3 · Jul 8th, 2019 · · · Ch. 3- I Need Your Help ·

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To write longer chapters you could do more conversations and when you have one chapter ready to go hold it back till the second is done and add them together while making them flow better at the previous margine.