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If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?
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Quincy has a rather soft and 'weak' voice and Hailea's voice is deepish.
Thanks for reading btw
I liked this story and the Silent Hill reference. If. I get this right, Quincy wanted to kill herself, but couldn't in the end?
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That is correct.
Thank you very much for reading and favoriting this story!
An interesting story. Quite different from MLP. Had its charm in some places.
The encounters are framed in an eerie theme that permeates the setting, and if you like me, haven't played the game, it was still possible to figure out how it may have looked like.
For me the main disadvantage is the stuttering as it was difficult to immerse in the dialogue when it became harder to read. You take a step back and wonder how much stuttering is he doing now, on a scale? Compared to earlier? And what is he trying to say? Or would have said if he didn't stutter?
Another disadvantage is that the environment didn't feel like Ponyville at all, but more some random Stephen King town. When making fanfics it saves a lot of time/words to use premade characters and locations, and it's also a part of the charm with reading them.
As a reader (or writer) you can jump right in, using pre-existing knowledge about the world. But if neither location or characters are used, and it doesn't look like Equestria, perhaps it would have been better to use a regular world?
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Thank you kindly for taking the time to read this story. That alone means a lot to me.
I wrote this at a time where I was slowly transitioning out of the MLP fandom, even though I didn't want to, so I tried to force myself to write a MLP themed fanfiction even though it could have been it's own story set in it's own universe.
That was a few years ago, and now I've accepted that I lost interest in MLP now. I'm looking into becoming a professional author now so I can express my stories freely. Again, thanks for the criticism. I really appreciate the honesty.