"I mean, this is going to be taboo up the wassu"

Okay, I legit laughed out loud at this.

Contest judge leaving a quick thought.

Overall the writing was pretty decent. I generally liked the dialogue between the two. The sex was reasonably well written.

But I gotta be honest: what's up with the pacing? Eight paragraphs in and fucking is about to start. I was actually getting into the dialogue a lot between Zeph and Shy but there was absolutely no build up. They talk about their incest like it's the local weather. The passion was a bit lacking between I think.

But you should write more bitchy Shy. She's fun when she's a sex starved banshee.

Not sure if it's a clopfic, or a drag race.

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Flutterbitch for the win!

So painfully mediocre. Writing is good, topic is meh. ＼(◎o◎)／

I do not know