Revealed
Twilight sighed, snuggling a little deeper into the hooves of her lover, Chrysalis’ hard chitin surprisingly comfortable when pressed against the soft fur of an alicorn. The two creatures lay on a large couch bathed in the mid afternoon sun, the bay window illuminating their private library, as well as the books they held aloft in their magical aura. The alicorn was a little more distracted than her lover, having all but abandoned her book in favor of cuddling into Chrysalis’ stomach while the changeling queen was still reading her own book intently.
Twilight frowned and rolled her eyes. “You know I don't think I’ve ever seen anyone read a romance novel so seriously before.”
The queen snorted. “It is only natural that I study my prey’s opinions on love.”
“And it's definitely not the fact that the protagonist is a princess who falls in love with a changeling.” Twilight deadpanned.
Chrysalis huffed. “I will admit that may have been what first grabbed my attention.”
“Uh huh.” Twilight muttered. “So, what's happening in the book? You seem a little tense. More so than usual nyway.”
“Queen Metamorphosis is about to reveal her true form to princess Platinum.” The queen explained.
“Oh?” Twilight peeked over her lover’s hole riddled limb and noticed that was indeed what was happening, and by the sounds of it the queen was quite nervous about this event. “Aww that's adorable. I almost wish it had happened like that with us.”
The queen blinked, looking down at the alicorn nestled in her forelegs. “But I haven't shown you my true form yet.”
“What? Your in it right now though.” Twilight explained, turning around and looking up at the changeling. “I mean, you are in your true form, right?”
Chrysalis shook her head. “This shape simply takes the least energy to keep up.”
The alicorn blinked. “Uh, so what is your true form then?”
The queen winced. “Trust me when I say that's not something you want to see.”
“But Chrysalis, I thought we were being honest with each other from now on.” Twilight began, gripping the changeling’s hoof. “You promised no more lies, remember?”
“I did, but look.” The queen sighed, grabbing Twilight’s right forehoof in her both of her own, squeezing it gently. “You don't want to know. It's as simple as that Twilight. The true form a changeling queen is repugnant to the eyes of a pony.” She sighed, looking away. “Trust me, I know how this is going to end.”
“Oh my gosh you have done this with another pony!” Twilight gasped. “What was her name… or his name?”
“That doesn't matter.” Chrysalis dropped the mare’s hoof. “What does matter is what happened in the end. They left, disgusted, breaking off our engagement and leaving me alone. I don't want that to happen to us. No, I can't let that happen to us, I don't know if I could take it.”
The alicorn’s jaw fell open, clutching tight the necklace bearing a single pure emerald ring at the centre that rested around her neck. “I would never do that to you Chrysalis! We made a promise.”
The changeling queen looked away. “That's what they said as well.”
For a moment the two beings merely lay there, with the queen looking off into the darkness, her features downcast. All while Twilight chewed nervously on her lip, unsure of what to do or what to say. She wanted to assure the queen that she would still be here no matter what, but she wasn't sure how to put that into words without sounding cliche or admittedly, even reassuring at all. When the queen’s growing sadness became too much to bear Twilight set her jaw and grabbed the changeling’s hoof in her own, pressing the limb against her chest, just above the alicorn’s heart.
“Chrysalis, I swear to you that no matter what your true form is, I will always, always love you.” Twilight stated in as confident a tone as she could muster.
“She said-” Chrysalis began, only for Twilight to grip the queen’s hoof tighter.
“No, they did not say these words, they did not feel the confidence I feel. I promise you.” The alicorn exclaimed.
“I… are you sure? What if I am something truly repulsive? Like I don't know, the shmooze? Or Blue Blood?”
The alicorn stifled a giggle that threatened to escape past her lips. “Well I don't think that would be too bad. Though it is a little mean to put the shmooze in the same category as that monster.”
The queen chuckled mirthlessly. “Are you sure though? Because I want you to imagine the most disgusting thing you can think of, then forget that thing and think of something ten times worse. That's the real me.”
The alicorn’s face screwed up in concentration only for Twilight to shake her head a few seconds later. “Sorry, all I can think of is the shmooze but with the personality of Blue Blood and I literally cannot imagine anything worse than that.”
“That is fair, but trust me when I say that the ‘real’ me, is worse than even that.” Chrysalis replied, adding air quotes around the word real.
“So how bad are we talking about here? Cus I kinda like the fangs, and the sharp horn and the…” The alicorn shuddered, running her hoof down the queen’s hard exterior lovingly. “Everything else.”
“Way worse. There is nothing in the slightest bit attractive about what a changeling queen truly looks like.” The queen sighed. “To think that we could look like anything, while our true forms are the most repugnant manifestations of flesh this side of Tartarus. Harmony is cruel.”
“Okay it can't be that bad.” Twilight remarked. “At this point I think you've hyped up your own hideousness to the point that I don't even think it's possible for you to be truly that ugly.”
“Oh you would be surprised.”
“Try me.” Twilight demanded, standing up from the large couch and gesturing to the empty space next to her. “Come over here and show me this terrible, hideous truly disgusting mass of monstrous flesh that you seem to believe you are.”
“Look Twilight I know we said no lies but this is something that should stay a lie. The last pony that saw me, threw up.” Chrysalis raised a hoof, cutting off Twilight’s remark before it could leave her mouth. “Like everywhere, violently. I thought she threw up her very stomach for a second there.”
“At this point either show me, or just admit it's not that bad and this is all a joke.” Twilight demanded.
“I’m not getting out of this unscathed am I?” Chrysalis asked.
“Nope.”
“Fine. But when you are dry heaving on the floor I will change back and tell you I told you so.”
“Wait, how am I going to know that this even is your true form and your not just messing me by turning into some long extinct monster or something?”
“When a changeling queen dons their disguise a wreath of green fire briefly hides them while we change, but when that disguise is dropped that fire is blue.” Chrysalis began. “Drones don't have though.”
“Okay.” Twilight frowned. “I’m really starting to think that this is all a joke at my expense. I mean you have to admit this does all sound a little far fetched.”
“I do admit it does sound strange, but please believe me.” Chrysalis pleaded. “Do you really think I’m lying to you?”
Twilight peered into the green orbs of her changeling lover for several long seconds before sighing. “I suppose not.”
“Now take a step back please, I will need a little more room.” Chrysalis remarked, shooing the alicorn away.
“Err okay.” Twilight muttered, giving the queen the space she wanted.
Now with a good fifteen feet of empty space to herself, the queen lit her horn, her expression suddenly filling with an uncharacteristic amount of indecision. “Are you sure your ready for this Twilight? Because one way or another our relationship will be changed forever.”
“Just get on with already.” Twilight exclaimed. “Honestly, at this point the hype is killing me.”
The queen shrugged. “Alright, but don't tell me I didn't warn you.”
Twilight watched closely as the changeling went through the usual motions that came with donning a disguise, only this time there seemed to be an extra step or two, with the queen setting her stance wide as she brung far more power to bear then normal. A second later and that power exploded from her horn, blinding the alicorn and causing her to reel back in shock, her eyes shutting instinctively to try and save her retinas from damage.
“Stars above Chrysalis.” Twilight grouched, her hooves pressed against her eyes. “I swear if this is just another excuse to moon me or turn into Celestia just to mess with me I am going to be so pissed.”
Twilight frowned, only now realizing that there was no audible response, and indeed the only thing she could hear what sounded like the wet rhythmic squelching of some nameless entity that was where Chrysalis had just been. The alicorn pursed her lips and pulled back her hooves, blinking rapidly to clear her vision of the spots that swam before her. Slowly but surely she began to see, and what she saw was truly unlike anything she had ever imagined in all her years of life.
Before her laying on the floor was a constantly shifting mass of tentacles without form or shape. Uncountable limbs wiggled randomly, some were shorter, and seemed to stick straight out as if sensing the air, while others were long and thick, able to drag the creature’s bulk across the ground if need be. More disturbing then that was the fact that there was no centre to the mass of tentacles, no torso or part that resembled anything Twilight had seen on a creature before.
“What the…” Twilight muttered, jaw hanging open.
The tentacles drooped, as if disappointed by Twilight’s action, but despite that the constantly moving, writhing mass of appendages remained relatively motionless, save for the ceaseless twitching and shifting they did. As Twilight stared she quickly realized that there was also a thick viscous liquid pouring out of the central mass of tentacles. The rising tide of pulsating green liquid cascading over the crystal floor in an undulating wave of bile.
Twilight’s nostrils flared, her mind only now seemingly realizing that the scent she was smelling was truly alien. The closest she could think of was ink mixed with changeling resin, and though it wasn't wholly a pleasant one, neither was it quite as foul as one might assume from such a description.
The twisting, pulsating mass of tentacles seemed to twitch with anticipation, and Twilight got the distinct sense that it was waiting for something. The alicorn was dimly aware that the queen was probably waiting for a response to this newest change, expecting Twilight to react to the horrific sight before her.
And that was a fair assumption, as the six foot by six foot pile of writhing tentacles was something straight out of the darkest nightmares of the most twisted ponies imaginable. Two more prominent tentacles rose upwards, as if asking what Twilight thought, the silence having stretched for nearly ten minutes at this point.
Twilight’s mouth opened and closed weakly, unable to muster a response.
After what felt like forever, the alicorn slammed her jaw shut, Twilight noticing that the tentacles were beginning to droop even more. Sadness, hung in the air, and despite the fact that the grotesque mass of revolting limbs had no facial expressions to read, nor even a mouth at all, Twilight could tell exactly what Chrysalis was feeling.
Unable to hold back anymore, Twilight muttered the first thing that came to mind when she had seen the twisting mass of tentacled limbs. “Dear diary, jack pot.”
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so changelings are shoggoth?
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!111 SHOTS FIRED!
And nice ending! Don't think any of Chrysalis' previous lovers had a thing for tentacles, did they?
I knew as soon as you said tenticals what twis reaction would be
Oh Lord that ending
I legit loved this piece with how ludicrously funny it was.
A loving partner that comes with multiple tentacles AND shape-shifting abilities? o.o Yeah no I agree with Twilight... Freaking SCORE xD
perfecto
Well, I’ve seen enough hentai to know where this is going
*Hastily schootches away on the Nope Cloud*
It was good! But the last line made me flee!
But it was good!
Please fix this typo, because this story deserves better.
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Simmer down, its fixed.
Cuddle times are a serious thing in a changeling household.
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So what if its a typo, you must not speak to Lord Jest like that, All hail the mighty writing of JEST.
9563183 I was saying the story was good, and the typo was a massive disservice because it was good. You're reading way too much aggression here.
What a cute story. Now only if the author somehow had a contribution page in which to donate money. Alas, it is not nearly obvious enough to slap the reader as if wielded like a buster sword.
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I knew it was coming, sooner or later. Bonus points for you my friend.
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No! The flurry of my downvotes shall block out the sun!
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No, shoggoth are about the size of a semi trailer.
They're definitely some flavor of nameless horror, though.
Sequel! Twi shows Cadence, and Cadence decides she and Shiny need to up their swinging game to eldritch levels.
9563208 Then my fleets shall rain death and destruction upon this miserable planet! Tremble before me, children of the dust!
Your ham, sir.
Ah, thank you Mr. Avery.
I thought Chrysalis was going to reveal Barney
Why Chrissy withered when Twi didn't say anything after her transformation? Aren't she emotivore empath, couldn't she feel the lust from Twi?
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I imagine the lust hadn’t kicked in yet as most of the brain went blue screen for a bit.
No cover image?
I feel like there should be a sequel where twilights gives chryssi a book of kinks and their explanations
Nice. Featured again. :3
Um. "Brought". I remember my... second? third? grade teacher getting onto us about "brung" when we were going over "know" vs "now" and other similar words.
But I love this - and that was about what I had expected LOL
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The only cover image would be nsfw
I was guessing she was going to be a human.
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I actually can't think of a cover art that wouldn't be a spoiler.
Any sequel will definitely be M rated.
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Shoggoths vary in size. Some are small, some are the literal size of a mountain.
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This.
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Couldn't find one that conveyed what I wanted without essentially spoiling the twist. If you find a good one, send it my way.
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She could be shutting off the empathic sense out of fear of feeling disgust from Twilight
Oh, Chrysalis is a Pleasure G.E.L.F.
I've seen worse from Thingpone.
Does the previous pony's name was Love Craft by any chance?
I feel very split about this
one its funny
on other side scary
i just leave and leave it at that
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How does this look? https://imgur.com/XZRoWWH Blue flames, but no secret reveal
Oh, ow.
I like all three, but the first version is hands down my favorite. Especially Twilight’s reaction.
Twilight is one kinky mare. Least Chrissy is ultra lubed. Makes you wonder what Flutters would be thinking since she was the one into anime.
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lying
(lie/lying lay lain is what you do; lay/laying laid laid is what you do to something)
The only "real" commentary I have right at the moment is that even if Twilight didn't … have the reaction she did, Chrysalis still should have known better; even if Twilight was secretly disgusted and trying to keep a straight face to spare her feelings, (1) Ten minutes is a really long time to do that, and (2) If she can keep it up then she clearly isn't going to leave Chrysalis even if she found the true form disgusting. And taking it from another angle, (3) after the 30 second mark Twilight would obviously be in "science!" mode. If anything, she should be drooping because half her dates for the next year have now turned into mad science sessions.
In any case, it's not a knock on your story because Chrysalis has obviously primed herself for a negative emotional response and isn't receptive to a counter-narrative.
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You put way too much thought into this.
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Overthinking is half the fun of this story for me, particularly with the palette-swaps. I'm curious, was the "most evil animals" inspired by the Futurama clip someone posted, or a variation on Cell from DBZ?
Part 3 gave me fond memories of a primitive browser-based game where you chose so-called "weapons" that painted the appropriate blood pattern on Barney with a basic sound effect.
P.S. Nitpicks, continued:
You're
and you're not just messing with me
are you reading about? … usual, anyway."
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I linked it. And yes.
I watch enough Hentai to know what going to happen next and it gonna need M rate for it.
Twilight lock the door
It took a lot of set up, but I still found the joke got me to chortle.
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Mission accomplished.
The last line hit me hard :D . Not the most disgusting thing I can imagine though. Especially if it's a shape shifter.