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That was EPIC WAR battle scene you had made my friend it had gotten me on edge of my bed just reading it. Hahaha. Aspen gotten total beat down from Rayne. Hulk would be proud. Rayne gotten beefed up with more troops at his disposal as well magic of aspen and his deer. Now we all know that the crow is an agent of some god or spirit, just waiting for rayne to fall in his/her grabby hand, but which dark spirit it could be: I bet its gonna be an avatar of death.
That big brain of yours twilight will gonna get you in trouble with someone you don't want to mess with, listen to the big kitty cat twi.
In the end once more, GREAT job your story making me impatient for the next chapter Haunter_Rayne
Senpai noticed me. imagin what rayne could do if he actuly had changling magic also i cant think of what else rayne would kill to set off his mysteruos adversery that is wathcing him exept for hunting for food. Also quick question about spirits as you have said the aspen is a spirit but is it a family thing for him but discord is imortal and a spirit so maby aspen would become immortal if he could get more powerfull? If rayne had a day off would he visit the school? for what reason does the mystory spirt scare discord and can rayne reason or defete him becuase if this other spirit is like rayne they could support him but if it is like a imortal spirit tyrunt then that seems like someone rayne would go after. Will rayne go an a date with luna? and finaly could rayne theoraticly summon the pony of shadows form limbo and eat him for power.
Sorry had alot of questions
Interesting way to end the fight and Make sure that His Panther form is seen as being in the wrong here while King Aspen ends up looking the fool.
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Hahaha. That comment was great. And don't worry, there is SO much more to come for this story! Thank you for your explosive encouragement.
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Aww thank you Marytryne. Heh heh, Hulk would be proud of me. That gave me quite a chuckle. Also I had been counting Rayne's hounds out before but now he officially has (as many as he needs for any given scene.) And as for the red eyed Raven, this is a new OC that I've been building up to since Tirek. ^_^
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Yes I noticed you hehe. And don't worry, I love answering questions. This will be a long comment post because I want to answer them all!
So he'll go after a changeling eventually. But he isn't ready for that yet. They are a hive community. They aren't like ponies who live together in a town but lead separate lives. They all do everything together and tell each other everything that happens with everyone. If a mysterious creature secretly attacked one of them then the whole hive would know about it in a matter of hours. He'll have to play that very carefully.
No, so Aspen is not immortal and neither was his father who was the Heart of the Forest before him. What makes him a spirit of the world is his ability to control the Everfree Forest at will. That green magic that controls the trees, that's his spirit power. Just like Discord has chaos magic. But the thing about chaos is that there is always chaos which is why Discord is always around. The thing about life magic is that it moves on and changes. So Aspen's spirit power must be passed down for it to continue. Likewise, Aspen was surprised to see the raven spirit because he is never around unless something calls for him to appear. You'll just have to wait to find out more though.
The School of Friendship really wont be a big part of my story until it gets into season nine stuff. And that is like WAY far off.
Yes Rayne will eventually start trying to date Luna. But for now she is still out of his reach. But we're getting closer to that with every chapter. We'll get there eventually.
The Pony of Shadows would "technically" be a possibility for him to go after. But I will reveal that is someone Rayne is avoiding for now. It didn't threaten Equestria for Rayne to hunt down Tirek or Sombra. But it would threaten Equestria to free the Pony of Shadows. He isn't so power hungry as to put ponies in danger. Remember, he's been playing it "slow and careful" all this time.
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There is no one easier to make into a fool than someone prideful. And pride is definitely Aspen's downfall. But for now, this is the last time you will see Aspen or the deer in my story. They return to the Thicket and stay there for the rest of the story.
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has he drained the alicorn amulate?
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No he hasn't. Rayne has a lot of knowledge about Equestria... a lot! But his knowledge about Equestria is subject to my ability to remember it all. At the time I started this story I falsely remembered that the alicorn amulet was melted down by Twilight and Celestia. A couple months ago someone informed me that it was given to Zecora and she is assumed to still have it after all this time. But, I didn't know that at the time so that means Rayne doesn't know it either. This exact point will eventually come up in the story but not for a very, very long time.
the buildup to the fight was very well done, and the fight itself was awesome I'm glad that Rayne was able to deflect the wrong doing onto Aspen, to be fair they were both in the wrong but what Aspen did was very unfitting of a ruler and he definitely deserves most of the blame hmm it seems like Twi believed him about Zecora but only time will tell if she truly does imagine that report to Celestia "and the were-panther seemed suspiciously well educated, maybe if we search equestrian college records we could find out who he is" I don't know I wonder who those ravens represent something evil no doubt fantastic chapter
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Ok so Aspen is defeated and who is this raven my guess is changeling, also what kind the report Will twilight tell to celestia and other, Will celestia leaves rayne alone also Will discord married flutershy?.
Also more please.
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Discord and Fluttershy relationship kinda confirm that but that will be VERY far off future chapter if our pal decided to put that in. For the raven i bet he/she a Greek god Hades version kind of character, the GREEK history version and not the Disney one. He kinda portrayed as evil but ain't truly evil, his neither bad or good.
What about Amoral Eels?