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I hate Spike he's just a little kid come on he's not even a teenager yet
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This is just a difference of opinion here. I respect that other fans of the show don't agree with me. But the viewpoint that I am taking with this story is that Spike has already reached the point where he had started growing up but then his aging was reserved. Furthermore, he has been stunted from growing ever sense he was shrunk back down
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Now the question is if this could allow him to live forever... *thinking face.*
This chapter felt like one of those situations where certain plot points were answered, however more questions have now been raised. Main characters have been more developed, yet their intentions have become more difficult to decipher. An interesting thrill ride to say the most, and a fascinating exploration of this world to say the least.
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Haha, thank you for that detailed review! Keep going, there is plenty of plot twist coming up for your to rack your brain over with. XD
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Spike is a Adult in a Child body
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Yes, that's right. That is exactly the point that I was trying to make in this story. ^_^
just now getting around to reading this and so far my title for the mc is 'magnificent bastard' or 'chivalrous pervert'
I hate fandom shipping. Sorry, that is it with for me.
It would not work out because it would make Rarity seem like a pedophile.
For all intents and purposes, Spike is still a kid. He looks, sounds, acts, and has the same interests as a little kid. It would not work with Rarity because with her it might as well be having relations with a child. Even his adult form still seems like he's just a kid in an adult body.
chapter 1-10... It is good so far time to call it a day and read 10 more tomorrow... Oh yeah forgot one thing the review... I have to say it's good so far... star trek and q... and then Maud ship I guess... 8/10 so far chapter 1-10
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Thank you very much for your review. It means a lot to me, I really appreciate it. Also thank you for putting up with my style of comedy. I hope it at least gave you a few laughs.
And yes, a deep ship does develop between my character and Maud. While the story is not about her specifically, Maud does remain a steady source of support for Rayne throughout the story.