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now that you are back i have a question. did rayne always obey the rules of a plesure pony even as a human or are the rules only applying now he is a pony and if it is only after he bacame a pony is it possible that his experence as a human before hand would help him not die to negativity as easily?
Oooh, very VERY good question. That is actually an important issue for his character. This will be brought up specifically in a (much) later chapter but to give you an answer now I will say that the rules of being a pleasure pony are similar to how I am in real life.
I have always felt naturally driven compliment others and try to make other people feel good about themselves when I can. Sometimes my efforts are appreciated and sometimes they aren't. Sometimes my comments can be misconstrued as flirtatious while often times they aren't always meant to be. So I took this facet of myself and turned it into a plot device for my character.
I don't want to go too much into this yet because I don't want to spoil anything. But let me remind you that the character Rayne is based heavily off of my real life self and you just touched on a big point that is a major driving force of his character. I sincerely hope that you enjoy reading the chapter once this detail is finally explained.
Honestly could we maybe have a schedule or something so we know what to expect from now on?
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With the way my mental health is right now... no.
But I have a blog here where I've been keeping the updates for this story all year long. You can always check to see my progress on the story and once I get back into writing more steadily I will return back to posting on a regularly scheduled day like I used to.
Now I'm just asking but will starlight EVER GET BACK WITH RAYNE WHILE HE IS WITH CHRISSY AND LUNA CAUSE I CAN'T TAKE THE TENSION!?!?!?!?!?
oof! What a chapter yeah, I figured that Rayne's thing with Trixie would end explosively hehehe, Starlight switching from mad to worried that quickly is sweet hmm, looks like Trixie's little plan backfired a bit huh now we have to deal with a ponyvile that knows about Rayne being a pleasure pony though... that could end really badly awesome chapter
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Hello Oryx, thank you for joining my story through these 90+ chapters. To answer your question, Rayne will always have a spot for Starlight in his heart. His feelings for her were accidental but genuine. But after she turned down his offer, he grieved that relationship and has decided to move forward with other persuits; returning back to his original goals.
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Hello there Midnight. I am always happy to hear from you. And yes, Trixie's plan totally backfired. Even as stubborn as she can be though, she knows when to cut her loses and leave. But thanks to her, both Ponyville and even Equestria will never be the same for Rayne again.
I JUST HAVE TO SAY THIS: it's just me who's thinking about the protagonist naming himself bast in his panther form?!
Third read through of this story and I gotta say, I still miss Ryane and Starlight being together, I always thought their interactions were really cute and heartwarming, that first date they went on being a prime example.
I don't particularly like the "destined for someone else" thing but it isn't a complete turn off from the story, still a really great read.
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Wow I really think that is amazing. I'm honored that you enjoyed my story enough to read it three times. Well fortunately I will have new chapters out soon.
Also I agree with your sentiment but if you don't mind I would like to message you privately.
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That seems fine
Considering how much Trixie constantly goes on about herself, I in NO way blame Rayne for attempting to tune her out. Why didn't he just explain that Trixie's innane rambling caused him to tumeher out.
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Oh I don't know...have YOU ever told a girl you zonned out because they talk to much? Here's a hint, it doesn't end well.
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Eh, it would be a little strange for him to name himself after an Egyptian GODDESS of fertility.