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<Sips coffee while sitting infront of round table and reading news paper> <looks up from paper and sips more coffee> Hmmmm.... Continue.
You do remember that Starlight was there, right? Do you even watch the show?
People forget that Spike is a kid. In everything that matters. He looks, sounds, and acts like a kid. He has all the interests of a kid. And his crush plays out the same way any kids does. This makes Rarity a pedophile here.
Plus the show actually proves it by showing dragons age slower then ponies by having him grown into an adult in the finale, which takes place at least 20 years later. Proof that little Spike is still only just a kid.
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First, it's alternative universe. Author literally told he'll stay close to the source, but will stray from it as soon as it stop working for him. Second, in case of dragons age is very fickle thing unless he's literally 14y.o. Then sure it's wrong. If he's 18 in this world, though, and it's age of consent for ponies and he literally grew alongside ponies and got their mentality then by pony standards he's fair game. He will be as mature in mind as any 18 y.o. pony. Third is his physical age and I already told about this being AU. He gave his ability to grow away for Rarity and the only way to fix this is to convince him to start hoard. Rarity actually saving him here from his selfless self and own mistake. Imagine being mentally 25, but trapped in a body of 14y.o. Fun?
Ah, and who told that Spike in the show grew as a normal dragon? What if his development was actually hindered that time and he had to reach this form way earlier? Even worse, what if it actually hindered his mental development too somehow? Not so pretty picture anymore, don't you think?
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👏 Applause 👏 Thank you!
I was asked if I even watched the show but I'd have to ask if they even read my chapter? You explained all of this thoroughly and clearly. I took a completely different viewpoint from the show to argue that Spike is no longer as young as he has been made to appear. And my story takes place YEARS after that fateful day where Spike grew and then shrank.
I respect other authors but I am not a fan of filly-stuff. This IS a clop story but I am never going to write a clop scene with the Crusaders or anyone else their age. Spike however is a different exception because as you put it, I'm arguing that he has reached to be more in his 20's but trapped in a teen's body, and this is like a curse that he needs to be saved from.
P.s. I never understood what titanhades70 was trying to say about Starlight here because this chapter was entirely my own content and there wasn't any reference to the show at all in this chapter.