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Wow.
You get the shovels and I’ll get the body bags.
Alright, alright, now on a more serious note - I noticed you wrote: “lose” and I think it should be “loose” in this sentence.
Oh, also:
This entire sequence felt really cringy.
And of course the main character makes the immediate choice to fake being a native despite having absolutely zero financial means, marketable skills (not even a cutie mark, apparently), influential contacts, or any knowledge of the world at all beyond what he might glean from a saturday morning cartoon show.
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Well I understand why you might feel that way in the beginning but I fear you might be getting ahead of yourself. These are things that Rayne is aware of and his first day in Equestria's is not over yet by chapter two. Rayne feels that it would cause unnecessary conflict to let anyone know that he isn't originally a pony and he sets his roots down to sustain himself fairly quick. I do hope that you will not be disappointed as you continue to read.
As a side note, I am not a fan of stories with the green human anon in Equestria. As such, this will not be one of those stories.
Umm, I shall continue cautiously
Your going to do that bullshit shipping.
my god he out Pinkied Pinkie
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This isn't incredibly hard thing to do when you know exactly what's going to happen. Keeping up with her, though...