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Oh fuuuuuuck! RIP
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Haha yeah. In the figurative and the literal sense I guess. XD
manipulative bastard at its finest right there
Ok, this is fucked up. Not because Tirek doesn't deserve death sentence, but because Rayne ate him. This is fucked up on a fundamental level and very close to cannibalism as in terms of eating another creature you can have a meaningful conversation with instead. Of course it's also fucked up because Tirek actually got reformed since map agreed that problem were solved, but he really deserves what he got. Especially if he sucked pegasi dry while they are still in the sky. I mean, come on, what would happen to all pegasi in Cloudsdayle in case Tirek sucked magic from them? Yep, it's raining ponies! Splat. Splat. Splat. -_-
So, killing him I can understand, but eating him? Rayne have to be a complete psychopath to do this. Is he? Couldn't he just bury or burn Tirek's corpse instead?
And no, his excuse for that action is as weak as a tissue paper. Hell, he didn't even ate meat like humans do and just chewed on a fresh corpse. Eww, just eww.
P.S. And memory manipulation just to make AJ ignore his temporary disappearance and worry less about Tirek by rewriting her memory with pretty much exactly what happened? Sleep potion and talking about this later would do the same.
Sooo, this guys a WHOLE villain
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You didn't get the purpose behind the memory alteration right, Rayne specifically made Applejack think Tirek's magic DOESN'T EXIST anymore, he made her forget that HE has it now.
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Hm... Guess I haven't noticed exact wording. This indeed doesn't include him acquiring magic even though Tirek gave it up. Makes sense.
My main issue with this chapter is the fact that he f-ing ate Tirek's body. Killing him was already bad, but deserved and understandable considering he was covering his tracks. Eating the body, though...