Fluttershy has been having strange dreams lately. Investigating them reveals a rabbit hole she never even knew existed. Loosely based off of Cultist Simulator.
First Story.
Edit: Changed the old title cause it was kinda crap.
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And thus her journey to the Manse begins.
So, our dear Fluttershy wishes to know more about The House Without Walls? How interesting...
A couple things I'd like to point out:
1. This is a Cultist Simulator crossover, right? You may want to add the Crossover tag.
2. You may want to find yourself an editor. I spotted quite a few grammatical errors in the last couple of chapters. Since this is your first time writing, this is perfectly understandable. Fortunately, there's a group on this site that may be able to help: Looking for Editors
This is the first Cultist Simulator crossover I've seen on this site. I remember sometimes comparing some of the characters in MLP to the Aspects of the Hours of the Mansus. I never pictured Fluttershy as someone who would (potentially) follow the Aspects of Moth. Anyway, I'll keep an eye on this one. I wish you the best of luck in writing your first story!
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I think that the picture has given the wrong idea. This isn't to be a Cultist Simulator crossover. Rather I'm borrowing heavily from it's premise and will branch out as the story unfolds.
Also I'll look into an editor.
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Ah...I see. I was wondering why she was seeing butterflies and not moths. Interesting.
I wonder, is Celestia The Sun in Splendor or The Sun in Rags? Or is she something different altogether?
The plot thickens.
I like where this is going, although I wonder if Fluttershy will be able to get out of the web of lies she is weaving herself in.
Twilight is going to accuse her of being in on the conspiracy, isn't she...
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Thanks for the comment. As for the story, we'll lets just say that we're getting closer to a head of sorts.
It was fine, nothing edgy.
It is hard to be strong when you don't even know which side is supposed to be the right one for you.
That outburst, it will be difficult to explain. Now Twilight is not just extremely suspicious anymore - she is absolutely sure. Something's wrong indeed