It's been three years since Chrysalis has started kidnapping ponies, and while it isn't certain, it's all but confirmed that she's turning them into changelings. Especially when a new changeling princess just so happens to show herself when Cadence disappears. With much of the world at war with these new changelings, it is up to Fang, a rogue changeling who has sided with the ponies, to infiltrate the hive and save the day.
This is an interactive fic, comments will affect the characters actions throughout the story, they act as a voice in the back of our character's mind, affecting their decisions and actions. However. this means that if the next chapter has been uploaded, your comments will be futile, just keep that in mind.
Rules for Comments
While you can leave them, accepted comments will follow these rules
1. The comment must make sense in the story, if two ponies are in a romance, for example, you can not just make our character kill him/her
2. This story is rated E so all accepted comments must follow suit
3. They have to be possible at the current time
Please note that this is a bit of an AU with certain changes, which will be explained in the first couple of chapters. There are also light themes of brainwashing and mind control in this story,
As of May 30th, I will be changing this story from Second Person to First Person, so there will be a small delay in updates while I put my time into shifting the perspective for the previous chapter.
Chapters 1 and 2 Has been updated as of June 7th
awesome!
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Thanks, I hope I can make a good story and experience from the quote em quote gimmick of an interactive fic. I just hope people understand what I mean by it. Like this first chapter is trying to get people to give a name to our Changeling
Name: Aura Sight (I chose this name based on the fact that it seems he sees a ball of color whenever he looks at a pony)
Gender: I'm going to assume a he considering the fact that you called him a he somewhere in this chapter
Strengths, weaknesses, and motives: too early in the story
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I don't see the gender thing anywhere, Can you point it out so I can fix it? The story is supposed to be in Second Person and not mention he or she when describing our Changeling
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There is also a space in the middle of the word appeared
Changelings are named after body parts, right?
Um... Fang?
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give a name to our Changeling?
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Yes, I probably should of been more clear, different comments will suggest things the main character will do, or things that will affect them. In this case we need a good name for our Changeling
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Yeah, I have no idea how changeling names work. Is it body parts like thorax, general bug terms like Chrysalis Ocellus
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Fixed
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I think I got a name for that changeling.
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That is . . .
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Bruce
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I'll consider it
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consider it?
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I've got two other names from other comments, It is in the end my story, so I pick the final name between the ones I have been sent
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ok
If I say no am I going to be instantly vaporized so that she can start over with the next changeling?
Option 3 being just born the bug is like the 4 year old in the 'evil over lord rulebook' and starts listing all the problems in her plan such as not knowing how changlings are supposed to act, how are they supposed to contact him, what is their contingency if he goes rogue. While listing the problems he would realize that he was either stolen or created. And ask a million 'why' questions till one of these 3 happen: one twilight would use magic to shut his muzzle; two distract her long enough for someone to come in and act as a catalyst for deciding or escape; or three decide that the bug is too different to be of use to her and will take care of bug until he is mature like she said
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Ok
Uh. . .
I mean . . .
Yeah about that. . . .
Understood
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I would say no but now I want to vaporize Fang
Thank you
Me: immediately thinks of The Hulk and Batman
NO! NO BETRAYAL!
I ain't in school, stop asking me to explain
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This is what happens when you write a story in the middle of a lecture
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Is that a response to me saying that I ain't in school?
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Yes
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K
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Going completely off topic and getting kind of mushy feely, I'd like to thank you, you have been at every one of my stories I believe since my first chapter of Is This Me, and after taking a break, I finally got back in because of going through my stories and seeing all of your comments, so thank you, now back to your regularly scheduled memes
Lel
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If it's a meme you want, then it's a sorta meme you'll get
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Just realized how ridiculous it would be for someone to walk in on a dream I should have said interrupted and change escape to leave
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Yes! 100 PERCENT /s
Green and black striped alicorn with glowing eyes. Then after that's rejected, gray and blue Pegasus.
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It be red and black and blue and green
Whatever person the author finds it easiest to write in
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thanks!
Ok, i agree with that other guy's idea, but im gonna put more detail into it.
1. Instead of grey, use silver
2. Instead of regular blue, do more of a cobalt blue
3. Use the silver for the mane, and cobalt blue for the coat
4. I dont know what the crap the cutie mark should be, that part is up to you.