• Published 21st Mar 2019
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A Chang(l)ing World- An Interactive Fic - The-Third



When Changelings and ponies are at war, It's up to Fang, a rogue changeling, and your comments to save Equestria

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OPERARTION INFILTRATION (Last Part; Welcome to the World)

Be a spy? How am I supposed to do that? I've never even seen anywhere outside of whatever that place was. I couldn't go into some type of fortress out of nowhere. But at the same time, it seemed that Twilight was my mother of sorts, at least by the way she was speaking. She seemed to want the best for me, as she had been at least tolerating your slew of questions. What was the worst that could happen if I accepted? What about if you denied? Weighing different choices, decide that it seemed obvious denying could lead to your death, and accepting could lead to your death as well. One had a chance of survival though, while the other was almost certain doom. There was only one choice

"I'll do it" I said

"Then we will need to train you right away, let me wake you up" Twilight's orb slowly faded, almost to nothing, however it began to grow once more, I tried backing up, before reaching the end of the floor, but the light didn't stop when I did. It began to encompass me as it completely covered my view.

The light fades to a new scene, instead of pure black and glass, I now found myself indoors. Surrounded by three of the 'ponies' as Twilight called it. There was a purple one, with both wings and a horn, the horn shining a lavender color. There was also a pink one, her messy mane an even brighter pink , however her tail laid flat and limp and seemed slightly grayed out. Finally, there was a Yellow Pegasus with light pink mane and tail. However what really stood out was the scar right under her eye. While it wasn't red or pink like it was fresh, it stuck out like a sore thumb from the rest of her. She seemed slightly scared, and you didn't know why.

All of them hovered over me, and it seemed as if they were waiting for me to wake up. The lavender one began speaking "Fang, are you awake?" the voice was the same as Twilight's, once again she showed caring and concern in her voice

"I think so." I replied, my eyes were adjusting to the light to the new brightness around me

"and you don't hear voices in your brain talking about the hive or anything like that"

"Am I supposed to?" I questioned

She smiles at that response, so my best guess was the answer was no. "Well yes, but actually no" She said, as she helped me off of what seems to be some type of of lab table and motioned for me to follow her, as well as the two other ponies "All will be explained in due time, for now, we'll worry about getting you on your hooves and settled in. Part of that is introducing ourselves more. You already know I'm Twilight Sparkle, this one over here is Pinkie Pie" she gestures to the Pink pony who had a bright grin on her face. "and that is Fluttershy" pointing out the Pegasus who was hiding behind a desk, looking nervous

Pinkie Pie cheerily trots up to you, and begins shaking your hand "It's so nice to have another changeling friend" She yells cheerfully, then narrowing her eyes she says "You better not f***ing betray us like the last one" she said bitterly. Slightly surprised by the one-eighty in her attitude.

I looked over to the other pony. She seems to be quivering in fear now.

approaching her, I put out a hoof "Hello Flutter- "

"PLEASE DON'T HURT ME!!" She began to bawl, as tears created small puddles around her.

Twilight sighed "Maybe Fluttershy wasn't the best one to invite here first" walking over to the yellow Pegasus, she comforts her.

The room fell silent, as Pinkie had now left, muttering about 'you being like every other one' and Twilight tried her best to console Fluttershy. "Maybe it would be best if you weren't in your natural form right now." she looked at the Yellow Pegasus still sniffling in her lap.

"What do you mean?" I asked the alicorn.

"Do you not know how to change?" Twilight asked "I guess since you aren't part of the hivemind you wouldn't know. I'm not completely sure how to, but our old friend Thorax said you just needed to focus on what you wanted to change into and you would do it. I guess you'll just have to think of a fake pony to turn into."

A fake pony? How would I look, what name would I have? Im pretty sure Fang is not a pony name. Having no idea, I had to resort to finding something that can help you focusing deep in yourself to find this pony. It would be the way you looked for what seems to be a majority of your life. So you had to think carefully. "i got it!" I said aloud as green flames surround you and you take your new form

Author's Note:

And with that, the third chapter is in third person now, if anyone sees any remains of this story back when it was in second person, please comment them below so I ccan fix them.

Until Next Chapter!


Derp :P

Comments ( 5 )

Green and black striped alicorn with glowing eyes. Then after that's rejected, gray and blue Pegasus.

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It be red and black and blue and green

Whatever person the author finds it easiest to write in

Ok, i agree with that other guy's idea, but im gonna put more detail into it.
1. Instead of grey, use silver
2. Instead of regular blue, do more of a cobalt blue
3. Use the silver for the mane, and cobalt blue for the coat
4. I dont know what the crap the cutie mark should be, that part is up to you.

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