Rainbow Dash is an agent for the Solar Division of the EIRA, an elite force of the Equestrian government. Skilled at espionage, she takes pride in her ability to face any challenge. But now, Rainbow Dash faces a mission that even she is not sure she can complete. One that could change everything for both Equestria and its neighbor, the Crystal Empire.
Along with her partner, a Lunar Division fighter named Twilight Sparkle, Rainbow Dash needs to complete her mission, at all costs. With her special ability, she usually prevails. But this time, she's not so sure. As politics in the Crystal Empire gets messier, and new dangers arise, she knows one thing for sure. She's going to need all the help she can get.
This story is a commission for my First Comment Gets a Story. This story is commisioned by Diokno44.
Well damn, nice job, can't wait to see how this plays out. Thanks
This sounds like an interesting story. Tracking this for future updates.
There are some minor goofs, like Princess Luna apparently having hands, but overall this first chapter was pretty good. Great job.
First Comment Gets a Story? What's that?
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I occasionally do a blog post/forum post in a group that virtually says, first person to comment gets a story written by me. For the next one, I’m probably going to specify oneshot, but since I didn’t this time, I’m obliged to make it multi-chaptered.
Yay!
this is pretty good, my man
Keep up the great work
This is great! Keep up the good work.