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MayhemsLement


Life is about is pain. You are in charge of finding happiness.

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Pretty good so far. When does the foal meet the main 6? Soon I hope.

I swear this sounds like a Danny Phantom story XD keep up the work

Wait... this is based off of something?:trixieshiftright:
I thought that this came from your imagination. If not then please good sir (or madam) tell me where you based this story off of?

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It is from my imagination. Yet the character is from a story I wrote with over 350k words. So there is a huge amount of info that most likely will never talked about in this story. So questions will pop up.

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so ... what is the history of 350k called and where did you publish it to read it?

Comment posted by MayhemsLement deleted Feb 6th, 2020

This chapter made me chuckle a bit. I can't wait for the next chapter!

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no i still have 15 chapters written but were currently in a editor vs writer battle so it may be little while till next up date.

To those who believed the fic was dead, fret not! Mayhem and I seem to have reached a compromise and assuming our schedules do not clash too much, we need not take so long between updates in the future.

Yay! An update! I can't wait for the next one! Is it wrong that I thought this chapter was a little cute? I think I am a little late for this chapter but that's ok!

Go Beyond! PLUS ULTRA!

Yeah, only cause someone thinks that narrative flow is a crock a' horseapples >:P

Comment posted by Dues ex Corvus deleted Jan 13th, 2021

I had to read the fic back to remember everything, I like it, I like each chapter, the problem is the amount of time each chapter takes to publish, not so much because of time but because simply with the passage of time one forgets things.

Excellent story keep up the good work and are you looking for your next story idear

For some reason I just got this today 🤔 atleast I get to read it, plz keep going when u can

as good as always. i hope u update this as frequently as possible, though if you're busy i don't mind the wait.

“If that true, then your entire planet should be burning. If you keep adding energy to a system, then everything would just spiral out of control. The only functional system is in which everything passes into the cold as the universe runs out.” With that Blade seemed to go into a daze as he tried to process this impossibility. “We’ve examined other universes, hundreds of them. All of them are Entropic, there is just not another way for a universe to be stably run.”

“That’s not true. Our universe is Exotropic and we have a thriving universe.”

Pointing out how impossible a detail about their world and glossing over it with it still just works is lazy writing. You shouldn't have brought it up if you can't come up with a reason to explain it beyond it just works.

“Blade…” She hesitated, “I can’t really be mad at you for what happened with Diamond Tiara, you did not understand because I failed to inform you about pony biology. Yet, what you did with Pinkie is not acceptable. You must respect that this world is different . If you want to have that fight with my brother when he comes back here with the other Princesses, you will apologize to Pinkie and you will make a point of becoming more accepting of views different than yours.”

Yet you can't and don't have to be accepting of his views hypocrite. I really find stories where ponies act like holier than thou hypocrites annoying. As long as he doesn't truly change or go a 180 it's fine. If they both change and actually become more accepting that's fine too. Just not him being the only one to change and the ponies being treated as 100 percent right behavior and world view wise.

Twilight braced herself and tried to take up the persona of a teacher or a disappointed guardian, “So, have you learned something?”

Oh fuck off. Not like you warned him and he made an innocent mistake when he didn't know better so don't do that annoying pretentious disappointed parent act.

Twilight was upset, but she had expected this answer. “Fine. I will stay out of your way. I can only hope that you will learn to see the world differently after you have seen the way we live.”

Hope not. While I don't agree with his ways if he wants to live that way let him. He doesn't seem to be causing intentional harm to anyone innocent and when he does he actually makes up for it. He is simply living by his values. Don't like it? Too bad.

“School is so that you have a basic understanding of how our world works so you can blend in, you ignorant colt. Think bigger picture. If you want to live in Equestria you must be able to convince those you interact with that you are not a threat!” Twilight explained, exasperated.

Blade: You assume I want to stay here in your ignorant nonsensical country. As soon as my work is done. I am fleeing on my own.

This was really good I hope to see more chapters soon keep up the good work

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These ignorant ponies, especially Twilight WON'T last a day in Blaze's dark world. :ajbemused:

By the way author, what is Blaze's "dark" world based on?

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