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62748 What?
62765
Oh, nothing. Nothing at all
Slow down the pacing a bit, I have a hard time knowing what the buck is going on!
It does seem kinda rushed, I have to admit...
62826 I'll work on that for chapter 2
I am now following you, don't be alarmed i'll leave you alone when you go to sleep... most of the time
fantastic
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaand tracking
guarantee'd a track from me, lol i like the way you write stuff, keep goin.....
how to be parker
step one) watch ponies
step 2) leave for equestria
step 3) ?????
step 4) PROFIT!
oh my...the hair part totally caught me off guard, and the way they said
"i love it" in unison had me crackin up, plz make more, i want to know whwat the police do back in america :)
love it
:) oh my word.....another great chapter....:) this will be amazing, and trixie? TRIXIE?!?!?
no...just no...but still, it only just adds to the amazingness and awesomeness effect this story has
Aww, don't worry Fluttershy, I'm sure one of you will get the courage.
oh no, the great and powerful trixie
d'awwwwww Fluttershy has a crush
Guess what I was going to write a story about... Are you actually 13 though?
71091 Nope
daaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwww! So cute!
Sadly I did not like this fic as it seemed slightly anti-human and the main character seemed like he lacked any depth. Additionally some minor conventional errors and poor pacing in general.
dun dun DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN
Uh... Why did fluttershy drop it all of a sudden. It was like "I love you. Lolkthnxbai."
Ah hay yes.
EPIC RAP BATTLES OF EQUSTRIA
The shit gonna go down! Cannot wait for more!
Aaaw snap, son.
Epic.
Just.
Wow.
tell them where you are?
omg equestrias going to get flooded by humans.....
Hm... Wait, if she says where they are, won't people just think that she's crazy?
Wut.
the last few scentences were just d'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww <3
My D'aaws. Take all of them.
This may just be my sleep deprivation talking but your whole story is rushed, unemotional, and lacks any reason to be written, I had to force myself to read the last chapters. I see how you would make a good Author if you added more details and plot (not that kind you pervert) to the story.
Keep trying you have potential.
(also thank you, your story made me make an account)
but again sleep deprivation.
D'aaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwww!
Hmm... Short and sweet. Just the way I like it.
:) now that thats over, pursue what you are going to do next
okay but i think gabe would have asked to stay with him but thats my oppinoun
i agree with lunadashscratch you should of had his friends stay
By the way they are searching, it sounds like they are searching for a serial killer. "Mr. Serial Killer, We will bring you to justice!"
love and tolerance man, that apply to non-bronies too.