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dam somepony is in a bade mood and looking to take it out on something.
yep this is going to be a fun and painful time.
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Ohhh yeah, and the shows just getting started
Another good chapter. Like the word play on the title. You did a great job with his approaching the bridge and all of their reactions especially Priest. I also will say the Pinki alert bit got me to laugh out loud.
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Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I've actually had this scene/ chapter set up for over a year, it was part of the original draft. I've spent a lot of time trying to make sure I got the feel of it right. I wanted to do right by Priest and the settlement in general. Add in that this entire 'side trip' actually has some pretty hardcore ramifications to the story and it's importance takes on a new light. And as for the title, I like putting in little easter eggs or tidbits like that when and if I can. Especially title puns. And this case it was too good to pass up.
I thought the Pinkie Pie Announcement was a perfect framing for the situation. As it would help with the pacing, and give the reader time to picture the frozen look of the world as Gearing realizes his grave error. While at the same time doing it in a humorous way. I've giggled every time I've come across it, and I'm glad you did as well. That was the whole point, after all!