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Just finished reading all the current chapter and I think the story really started to get interesting when the captured foals were saved. I do like that the story focuses on the recovery and restoration of the Stable and the gradual unavailing of all of its mysteries about out it, and to be honest I really like this sort of setup for a FoE story over a wasteland hero running around and shotting anything around. I had mix thoughts that you took races of the Ponyfinder Game like the elementals and Clockwork ponies. I will be keeping an eye on this story and if you are in need of commissioning a cover art for this story let me know.
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Thanks! I put a lot of thought into it, and had a bit of concern that it might be a bit too slow paced at the start. But Stable 68 had plenty of problems to root out, and at the same time gave a perfect opportunity for the characters to interact and build up an inter personal relationships. For better or ill.
Also, with my writing style, I like to pace like music. With varieties of intense action mixed with spots that are more subdued. Let's one appreciate each bit more by giving that juxtaposition. To pull a quote from Incredibles' Syndrome "When everyone's super, no one will be." If everything's 24/7 110% action it just gets kinda 'meh' after a bit.
Ponyfinder is exactly where I got the inspiration/ reference for them from. Also with "Suncats". I mean canonically there's been mention of felines etc, but I thought using Suncats specifically was useful. Although, I've taken some pretty serious artistic liberties with each of the races, vs Ponyfinder verse, so please keep that in mind going forward as all things else being equal: they aren't. Especially with function and origin. Outside of name and basics, I've written my own rules for them without paying attention to Ponyfinder canon.
As for the art, definitely going to need some eventually! I've got an idea for a cover, but it's going to be a bit before I can sketch out the idea. Desktop with software went down. Boo. I've been fighting with the combined timeline so much haven't had much time for anything else. I'll keep you in mind once I scrambled out of the trenches.
I am really enjoying both your story and your writing style. I have already recommended this story to another friend of mine. Keep up the good work.
I have to admit that I was pretty confused when Scarlet first made her appearance in this chapter until I realized that Scarlet wasn't SCARLET but a damned dirty synth! Sneaky bitch got away but I have a feeling that may not be the last time that she is seen. I like how Gearing showed how much he would do and how far he would go for those that he cares about and it was really sweet to see Gearing, Sable, and Silver Thorn like that. I do wonder if Sable acts the way that she does because of what she has seen in the Stable, or if it is something more that hasn't been revealed yet. I do wonder how you are able to put implants in a clockwork though, and why they aren't all working... Also wonder how many of them there are...