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interesting use of sprinklers, nice chapter.
A very interesting chapter. I am looking forward to the next one already. I still have a feeling that Sable is going to be one very torqued off pony from earlier. I like the addition of sarge and I believe I understand what is going on with him. Memories can be a bear.
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Thanks, I thought it was a pretty lit idea...
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I'm glad you're enjoying the story! And, yes, Sable definitely has a reason for concern and to be irked about what's happened during her absence. As for the Master Sergeant, I think you just may be in the right ballpark. But it'll be a bit before we'll know for sure.
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With this situation I tried to put in a few clues to things to get the reader to raise an eyebrow about what was going on. I'm glad that bit worked. :) But, you're right, the Institute's presence in the story is far from over. The scene with Gearing, Sable, and Silver Thorn is another point of contention for Gearing on a personal level, and showing a certain dichotomy with his life and existence. It's a bit that's going to take a long time to resolve overall and will arguably not reach the real conclusion until the end of the story.
As for Sable, I can say that there's definitely more going on than surface appearances. Sable is an enigma. Like a jigsaw puzzle that you haven't been given all of the pieces to yet. You might be able to guess at it already, but things will become clearer over time.
For Gearing's implants, as he'd hinted with his phrasing in this chapter, he has several major ones.