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As usual, you're hitting on some great points on that. Gearing's been mostly quiet about it for a reason. But the reasons, along with more of his background, will be made a lot more clear over the next couple chapters as there's a lot of Gearing's personal background revealed over the coming weeks.
Well the looks like the colt can grow to full buff adult size, but his mind is still that of a young colt for some reason. I wonder what would make him grow so fast all of the sudden and what you revers it beyond death. I am starting to thing that the tension between Gearing and Swift is inevitably going to culminate into a a fatal confrontation between the two if she keeps letting her throma get the best of her like that and can give him the benefit of the doubt. With what she got Pharynx to do to him is only going to get into Gearings head that their is just no reasoning to her and that she will act any and all of her paranoid mistrust not matter how much good will there was built up between the two. Well this was an interesting chapter keep it up.
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Trust is definitely an important hinge that can make or break any group. And it's been shaky at best going every which way within this group. Good catch on that and, you're right, it's not sustainable. Something's eventually gotta give. But, those resolutions are going to be a bit further down the road. The next few updates are going to, as I previously promised, spend a bit more time explaining Gearing's past and motivations.
Another great chapter! I really enjoyed the development that Swift and Gearing had! Kind of surprised to see how large Pharynx has grown in the time since they arrived at town. I also like that they ran into "big daddy" and "Big Daddy". Overall a very interesting and informative chapter. I was rather surprised to see how Gearing seems to be having some difficulty with grasping reality after not sleeping or taking "personal" time for himself. It was sweet that he tried to protect Swift from the flames but I couldn't help but laugh when he got clocked by her and THEN by Pharynx. Love reading this story!