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I really enjoyed how the chapter played out. I did notice that the alarm ended but not where it began. I also like the "Shining" reference. Though I am curious as to what was going on with those roaches. I don't think I have ever seen roaches in any of the fallout games or stories that had mandibles that durable. Those poor kids though, having gone through everything they have only to have Gearing literally scare the shit out of them and then be redeemed once again through his actions. I also enjoyed seeing Gearing be smart enough to verify the level of decontamination protocols. I think most would have just walked back in without thinking about it.