Everyone likes a good dream.
Peter is no exception to that. But this dream turned out to be a LOT more than just a good nights sleep.
Finding himself somewhere not his bed not at home. Not even on his Planet anymore. Follow Peter in this new World. Where his kind has been before and left a bitter taste in the mouth of Princess Celestia.
This is my first Story EVER. Please be considerate when rating it.
Additional Tags: HiE Story.
Warning
This Story is based on the idea that Ponies did meet humans before and didn't get along with them.
Chapters (6)
It's an interesting concept. But definitely held down by poor grammar. If you can improve your grasp on english I bet this would be a great read.
9935174
I am searching for an editor, and I wouldn't shy away from paying one. I just don't know where to look.
9935987
I'm willing to do it for free
9949705
Did you edit Stories before? Or can you show some reference(s) what your editing style might be?
9957757
I helped edit a harry potter can fix back in the day around 2014
Sadly the author deleted his account years ago.
Other than that nothing else.
But ill do my best!
9935174
This might be a long shot, but have you considered writing down the story in your native language and having someone more familiar with both it and English translate it? The grammar and spelling is a hurdle, sure, but I feel there's a lot of meaning that might be getting lost.
9970052
Actually I have.
My native language is German.
The biggest issue would be time. I started this story as my way of "giving back".
I have been on fimfiction for a number of years. And most peeps I know enjoy a good story. But I know of no person who has Time and the skills required to be able to improve on my lack thereof.
So I turned away from the idea since. I wouldn't give back to a community which I REALLY enjoyed. Plus. I probably wouldn't write it.
Wow I am really enjoying this so far, just a few spelling/grammar mistakes but aside from that I love this
9983074
Thank you very much.
Deploying lifeguard to save the wayward human...
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Its good.
10301694
Thank you
10301797
shut
When both the angel and the demon on both sides of your shoulder agree to one thing. "DO IT, YOU'VE GOT NOTHING LOSE!"
I am closing this fic due to lack of time and lost interest.