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DougtheLoremaster


You can't give up your laughter, cause you're scared of a little pain~. Writing to relieve PTSD. Enjoy my misery <3 you all. Discord: dougtheloremaster

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This is a side project of mine. It will contain seven chapters or short stories total. Please keep in mind these stories can and will be ranging from psychological terror such as mindcontrol, to physical terror such as gore and carnage. All stories will be mature content read with discretion. I shall apply appropriate tags as the others are published as needed. I hope to do at least one story a week in between my ongoing chapter a week for thestral with the golden halo. Please enjoy and HUGE shoutout to Statiskyz and Pink Wolf for helping me guage my content.

that was subtle and terrifying, i love it do pinkie next.

9318541
I completely agree. Good thing this is an alternate universe, where Aj and the others are simply...not themselves.
I appreciate you reading . /)(\

9318561
I am glad you like it, I will publish pinkie pie next week though currently i am working on Fluttershy. /) (\
<3

9318561
I don't do anything horrifying like this!


9318587
Oh, Ok. But make sure you don't make other me scary!

9318596
I wish i could, pinkie, as you and Aj are my personal two favorite ponies. However, these are grimdarks...best i can promise is the pinkie pie one won't involve cupcakes or bakeries. In fact I pinkie promise! <3
Cross my heart and hope to cry stick a cupcake in my eye.~

9318615
Now remember, you can't break a Pinkie Promise!

9318636
As sure as my name is Sugarcube (Doug) I will never break a pinkie promise. Should I do by all means feel free to have pinkemena pay me a visit for being a bad mare. Though, for all intensive purposes can you at least let me make sure I've finished all my Mistress's chores?

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Oh, silly, don't pretend you're your own character! It's in an alternate universe, you said so yourself!

9318656
self insert tag. Besides..dougtheloremaster...doug the MC....maybe it is me~

If it is you, writing about what happened and posting it publicly would make you a bad mare, silly!

9318756
shhhh! Mistress will be very cross with me if she hears that!
*offers a rock candy bracelet as a bribe*
This never happened!
XD
(Seriously conversation made my night)

9318765
OOH! TWITCHY TAIL!

...

Uh oh. AJ just fell behind you.

this was crazy.
and WAY darker than it seems at first.
even after finishing it, it keeps getting darker as I turn it over in my mind.

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sometimes the happiest endings can devastate the mind far more effectively than an all out gore fest. I am really glad you enjoyed it. I am going to do one tale per mane seven member. some will be subtle...others a sledgehammer to the face but i promise, none of it will be boring. enjoy the ride of Equestria's nightmare side.
<3
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I present the tale of "Don't feed the bunnies!"
Maybe next time some pony will listen when Fluttershy speaks.

up next, Rarity
coming soon.
<3
enjoy all!

Transformation magic that starts on the mind and then does the body. Usually it is the other way around.

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in this case it would be military effective as they appear to be normal...until it's too late~
I love to experiment with writing styles such as...a "happy" grimdark.
I mean don't the MC seem so happy at the end?
how wonderful~
I do hope you enjoy my unique brand of horror. There is much more to come!
<3 /) (\

9319841
I usually stay away from horror, but that is due to most of it these days being gore.
Your tales so far are much more in 'The Twilight Zone'.

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Is it so bad to hate miserable endings? I don't stomach gore that well, especially if it is overdone. When it is subtle (blood here, cut there) it can carry a far more impactful effect. Usually ponies (and humans) overdo gore to the point where it loses its true purpose in writing; to provide an ominous back drop for the plot. Gore is never meant to be a focus more a writer's device to set the stage. I prefer a bit of finese or tact when handling gore in my fics. You will see a gore tag but in the future but know that it will be handled delicately.
<3
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Are you sure you were not Rod Serling in a past life?

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There is a fifth dimension beyond that which is known to pony. It is a dimension as vast as space and as timeless as infinity. It is the middle ground between light and shadow, between science and superstition, and it lies between the pit of Ponykind's fears and the summit of Equestrian knowledge. This is the dimension of imagination. It is an area which we call the Twilight Zone.

;) may have paraphrased a little
<3 /) (\

I am astounded at all the encouragement from the comments, for those curious I wrote the description to the next short story featuring the beloved Rarity. I am currently in the process of writing it now. <3 /)(\
Just to clarify. I am a brony, yeah, yeah shocking I know. I absolutely love and adore the mane 7 and their personalities. The reason I am writing these short...twisted stories about them stems from that love. Too many fanfic writers while they may write wonderfully dark tales, lose a key component in their writing. A horror story, a grimdark, is to capture the imagination AFTER a tale has been told. I want to create stories that will have you comptemplating the truly twisted nature of them long after they have been read, not just during.
For all those who understand the true soul of nightmare fuel, my readers, I give you my warmest brohoo-....wait I seem to still have residual aftermaths of my current work in progress on my hooves, let me just wash that off....
There we go as I was saying let me give you my warmest loving brohoof.
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Making Rarity Proud is now published, After the plot changed 3 times, I finally found the most unsettling outcome i could without being too...obvious. I seriously rewrote this 5 times. I had to give all my readers my very best. The description has been edited as well be sure to read it before the story. To please Rarity, Opal will do anything it seems...what a shame.
<3 enjoy loves!
up next Pinkemena Diane Pie takes the stage as her alter ego Pinkie Pie.
I promise..no baking will be involved.~

9318541
the description for the next short story is up...your alternate personality should stop hopping into my intros...You Pinkie's I swear...
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<3

And so Rarity gets a new dress dummy. Or will, after getting that body embalmed and painting it.

9323041
wasn't it generous of her to give that...pathetically useless mare...one last command to please her?
so glad it made the MC smile...after all I hate miserable endings

seriously though, was it worth the wait? I rewrote the entire thing like 5 times..

9323082
I was more expecting the victim to be told to hold a pose and be sewn into dress dummy form.

Your universe has a simple warning for visitors: Strong Mental Shielding Required.
One of my OCs would fit in here, though she is a little nicer, as she does 'catch, play, release, repeat'.

9324176
*SPOILERS* well i mean...sweetie bell was dead sitting at the receptionist counter, manipulated by rarity the entire time...and she was stitched up...what exactly do you think the MC's corpse would end up as? Like i said I wanted the reader to have their imagination run wild AFTER the story..not during.

I do plan however to try an...experimental writing style on my next one...mental shielding may not help the MC all that much

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fixed that. sorry.

More mental shielding required? Oh, where did my Gardevoir and Mismagius run off to?

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nah we need a tank..call in reuniculus with its high sp def.
also with pinkie pie coming soon....gonna need all the shielding we can muster in any anime...
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<3

I'm extremely ill right now, so please be patient I may not get the pinkie fic out this week as I can only do a little each day. Rest assured it should be done by next week. Currently I am halfway on it. As always I strive to give you all the very best I can. <3 /) (\

Phew that was..an adventure and a half. Pinkie Pie's grimdark, party games ponies play, is officially ready to be read. Thank you for your patience. I am no longer sick though with the holidays coming up, the next in the series featuring none other than the speeding rainbow herself, Dash may take a bit to be finished. As always give me your thoughts and enjoy the chills~
Slight warning: Party games ponies play has mild language.
<3 /) (\
This writing style is one I have never attempted before, so I truly can't wait to see your thoughts

Comment posted by DougtheLoremaster deleted Dec 17th, 2018

Oh the poor MC...broken beaten and lost. Sweet Celestia, it seems her life was simply Dash'd. Please enjoy! Now if only she knew her name...

Comment posted by DougtheLoremaster deleted Jan 11th, 2019

Story Six: Atonement
My name was Wendy Seabreeze. For twenty three years, I had called her mom. My parents had gone to a party in tears. That same night an earth pony with pink fur and a outlandishly fluffy tail and mane had told me they were not coming home. "Oh my, your parents were pathetic! If only they had jumped sooner, they might have survived that trip mine. Oh well. Bye!"
I had been taken to the orphanage. It was run by a lilac unicorn. She had greeted me upon arrival with a warm hug and a gentle voice. "You are not alone, welcome to your new home sweetie."
I'm still not sure what it was about her but for some reason I felt relaxed and safe. I can vaguely recall her horn glowing a soft sea green as my mind slowly went blank and I replied. "thank you mommy."
For twenty three years, I had called her mom. Now I assist her at her side in handling those at the orphanage and act as a teacher. I had grown accustomed to assisting mom in her teachings. Mom herself acts as the headmistress, uses her magic to make repairs to the run down building, and is quite adept at healing magic when a young filly hurts herself. Life was absolutely perfect...or so I thought. In this world however, nothing was as it seemed.
This is the Starlight Story. Feel the chills, let your spine tingle, and enjoy loves <3

Please by all means anypony or creature whatever you may be, even should you be human; let me know your thoughts on my work! Not only does it encourage me, it helps me make tweaks and adjustments to my writing style. Any constructive critism or perhaps praise, all are welcome. <3

Comment posted by DougtheLoremaster deleted Apr 25th, 2019
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