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Meh, Celestia acting like everyone is 5 years old and treating Anon as some menace just cause some of her subjects are into interspecies gets old quick. That dicking cool her down?
10/10 nearly busted my nut. 'Course I'm trying to gain powers of levitation at the end of the month so I can't go squanderin' it. Good shit though. Lookin' forward to Anon beddin' all the thirsty bitches.
What?
When you watch what is essentially a live performance of porn, between a princess and what could amount to a sex god. Who wouldn't get into the mood?
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Celestia's problem has always been that she's simply too important. Even with Luna back, it's still her kingdom, they're her subjects, the empire is her responsibility. Everything is always her responsibility, always her job, always her fault. And now everyone she cares about seems to love this thing in the ways they never loved her? This is her personal hell. She just wants simplicity, the same as Luna, but she can't have it - she has to be the example, the level head, the voice of reason. While Atlas may have quenched her immediate thirst, I'm afraid in the long run he's only fanned the flames.
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Hmm... Wonder where you could have gotten that idea? But while there are parts of him that will ascend repeatedly, I think we'll let him handle all the impaling in this story.
*<>* celestia boinked a changeling ...willingly
Anon now has perfect leverage against her for changeling reform ! Whoo
Wish the clop party’s were a bit longer almost Seems a bit rushed do you not have a lot of practice with it Or do you want them to play a minor role
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The amount of time I devote to pure honest-to-goodness clop, and the kind of barebones feel of it are intentional. A bit of it is to leave it as a sideshow to the actual story, because as much as I originally wanted this to be mindless boner fuel, I have bigger plans now. The overarching reason, though, why I leave things as short or as vague as I do is to give you, the reader, a lattice upon which to imagine whatever you desire. I'll give you the mechanics, the context and the scene, but you get to fill in the details. You get to imagine the warm, velvety embrace as you slide into a princess for the very first time, the shock as she shows her true colors, the sweet release as you flood her with your seed...
For the experience question, I've written easily hundreds of thousands of words of clop before. I was very active (under a different account that I no longer have access to) around Season 2 and published just shy of 50k words across two stories which have nearly 10k views between them (not to gloat, just context). I wrote differently back then, though. I slaved over those stories and many more that never saw the light of day, writing with no deadline, no plan, just a vague prompt and needless continuation. I'm infinitely more proud of what I've written here, even if it doesn't ring all the same bells.
That said, with the 2000 word crunch, this specific chapter ended up being just a tad more rushed than I wanted. I don't know that I'd necessarily change it, but I'll admit there's room for improvement here. Once I finish the story itself and move onto the "Deleted Scenes" style chapters from the Extra Chapter Challenge, those will likely be a lot naughtier.
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Fear
i just realized that all the chapters are 2000 words long
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Will have to agree. She's straying into the Pop-Up Antagonist role that she's so often placed in in our community simply because she's the most recognizable authority. Flimsy good intentions leading to a fairly monstrous, misguided character who despite a couple thousand years or more of knowledge, rule, and wisdom, usually winds up defeated by some catechism of someone under 40 years old.
Still, with the disconnect between where we're learning about the characters and sudden explosions into almost surreal sex scenes it doesn't come off as lazy and/or malicious on the part of the author like I so often see. Time to see what happens next.
the whole time I was mentally yelling “Fucking hell, this is absurd.”
then I read this line and had a good giggle. and i appreciate that, really.
ha, he didn’t expect that now did he?
Well, when the opportunity arises, why not get a quick snack?
Fuck! Royal Orgy all the way! Im so proud of Anon to inspire EM so HARD
So, sunass horse is a bigoted xenophobic barbarian once again, but this time she doesn't even try to hide the fact that she won't acknowledge any sort of Diarchy or show restraint as someone whos... idk, not a five-year-old?
And no one even slaps her for it.
Perhaps there's something later in the chapter but since all characters simply roll with it just to start the orgy... Couldn't bother reading it further.
I mean really?
She almost literally says "You filthy creature dare to touch the royal ass of my sister? I'm gonna murder you just because I can!"
Its like reading transcript for porn - a waste of time. I was here for the story just as well as the nasty, but the story shat itself.
I'm overthinking this aren't I? Just finished "Coming out of it..." series, so I still wanna see heads on pikes.