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all i can hear out of chrysalis's voice is a chip munk when anon shrunk her
Look! American politics! Lmao, I have no idea if it was an intentional little quip or not, but it made me laugh, so good job either way.
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Totally intentional. Did you know that every member of the Changeling caravan was once a wanted criminal? We're letting them through our borders so they can come and take our
moneylove and our jobs, all because the Fake News princesses secretly support an underground ring of gang-funded foalcon operating out of a pizza parlor in suburban Canterlot! They're rapists and murderers, every one of them!...too real? Yeah, too real. fuck
Hey wait a minute this seems... familiar...
One bullet is magic, too.
What the hell happened to Chrissy being happy for them?!?
Unfiltered Opinions of a tired man and spoilers ahead. Viewer Discretion Advised.
Now I'm sure that there's going to be something to come out of this that completely redeems Chrysalis like with Celestia, 50/50 I think my odds are, but seriously she in all honesty knows this is the last ditch effort for her people. They are only eight-hundred or so strong if I remember correctly and I'm going to assume she launched this attack because ponies blasted into her hive and made off with Anon and Em, so she either is saying 'fuck it I'll hold the town to the last changeling' in an Alamo-like final showdown or she was going to use the town to leverage the release of Anon (Infinite fucking love source) and Metamora the only other changeling that is as powerful as her.
If it's the first reason then she has completely doomed her species in what I can only say is the worst tactical move I've ever seen in a military action. Putting all your eggs in one basket and all that. Now then if it's part two then why the fuck is she fighting them. Forget the reason for her being here actually why the fuck is she fighting them!? I can understand not trusting of an enemy nation that has almost made your entire race extinct but she has to know she'll never keep Ponyville. By attacking both of them she's throwing her infinite love source out the window and on top of that she's wasting love she'll need when Celestia and Luna inevitably get there. I'm sure she has a plan or she's defeated before we ever hear the plan but damn this feels so damn rushed it's unbelievable. Rushed mostly cause she was supposed to have enough love to feed whole hive for three weeks if I remember correctly from when Anon and Em were with her.
As a final note Queen Chrysalis was so refreshing to read in her first appearance, I'm to invested in this story to stop now but I feel like this challenge for you to keep the word count to two-thousand for each and every chapter really hinders it in a massive way.
I know in hindsight I should probably read the next few chapters and finish the story before leaving a comment like this but I'm impulsive and a lover of Queen Chrysalis not a good combination here.
Edit: I was tired and while I still stand by this as the plan wasn't very tactical it gets better from here to the end.
Wat. You're going through with Chrysalis what you tried to do with Celestia, huh?
Huh, I feel something funny going on. This sounds like in-show chrysalis, despite story Chrysalis sounding much more reasonable
Changeling Queen Chrysalis is a pragmatic leader not a lunatic. That all makes no sence what so ever!
1. They need to grow in numbers or die out very soon.
2. Pony would feed em and give protection.
3. Pragmatic as she is her ego would not overtake her logic approach... This just trow away her character development you established Literally trowing away a infinit love producing couple.
He produce week worth love in one throneroom orgy.
4. Chrysalis has no Changelings to spare to lose for any reason. Even if she successful gain all magic she could wish for resisting forces will exterminate Changelings in there Guerilla war. 800 or less Changelings and we dont even know the male/female ratio for repopulation. Raising the newborn will take TIME & RESSOURCES. This story twist makes less sence than Rape-lestia
I guess were her for shits and giggels from the start anyway...
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Yep story twist without logic or sence... Guess Rape-lestia was just the start...
This is totally nonsensical.