I like writing and ponies. Incidentally, I also like writing about ponies.
Following the exploits of a group of unicorns and their other friends in the ancient realm of Windsreach, this story (submitted for National Pony Writing Month) chronicles the creation myth of the Elements of Harmony and gives more insight into the world of Friendship is Magic (referred to as "Rhodos") and its inhabitants in the ages before the dawn of Equestrian society.
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I like the look of this story.
The chapters themselves are rather short, but I haven't much right to dictate your pace anyways.
Make sure to hit enter twice between paragraphs. Also, indenting is only really neccesary at the beginning of a writing.
Other than that, keep it up.
I like where this is going.
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Thank you for you feedback! I do know many authors will put an extra space between their paragraphs, but since—as you have noticed—my chapters are generally short, I didn't see the need to further break up the text with extra separation. I also distinctly prefer consistant indentation in non-fiction writing, and don't know of many pieces of writing in that genre that try to do without it.
I'm glad to see you're enjoying the story! I'm sending in subsequent chapters now.
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Ah, I see. Glad to know that was all intenional.
I shall be indeed watching for those next chapters
I like this story and I'm rather curious to see where you go with it. Keep it up!
Incidentally, since you issued the challenge:
“We have convened,” she began imperiously, To provide these defendants,
you're missing the opening quotation mark after 'imperiously.'
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Wonderful! Thank you, sir.
Glad to see you're enjoying the story.
EDIT: Fixed!
Good story
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Thank you!
Another chapter should be out by the end of the day, so stay tuned!
1093287 hope so its getting good I can just feel it in my bones