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MysteryLover17
A guy who loves mysteries, wrestling, my little pony and food that's bad for you.
MysteryLover17
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Not a bad start. Need to cut down on the profanity. You don't have to curse every five words to be gritty.
Seems pretty solid overall. I'll keep an eye on this
Is this story based off of this one?
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No, in fact, I never even read this story before. I knew it existed, but I never read it. No, this story is based on Jacoboby1 stories. His Noir series were absolutely brilliant. That’s what made me wanna create my own.
If the main OCs in this story had voice actors, what would they sound like?
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Honestly, I haven't really thought about it.
Maybe Melody Rays would have a voice that kinda sounds like Olivia Benson from Law and Order: SVU. But, I'm still not entirely sure.
As for Comet, he would have a voice like an excitable little kid.
For Shadow, I'd think he'd have a kind of an intimidating type of voice.
As far as the others, I'm not sure. But thanks for asking though.
Oh, and Rocky would have a type of obnoxious preacher kind of voice. Just saying.
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Can I please get a link to his profile, then?
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What do you mean?
Alright you have my attention, let's see where this story goes.
This is a very interesting story and I am enjoying it a lot. Also love the Westboro Baptist church vibes from these bigots.
And that's why you wrap it up folks.
Yeah not very surprising that Rocky is gay.
Whoa Celestia you know the rules no teleporting ponies without consent.
Not a bad first case.
Well done
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Thanks. Me personally, I think I could have done better with it. I admit I think I got a little sloppy at the end. But, I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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Yeah it did get a bit sloppy at the end but it was still a good story.