• Member Since 10th Aug, 2022
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The_hazy_king


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Hey. Let me just say the story really got me interesting. Also in the beginning it reminded me the movie Jango in the beginning of the movie, but other than that my friend u get a 👍.

Huge grammar error in the description: use "Their" instead of "they're". "They're" is a contraction of "They are"

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Yeah, I realised that as I was writing it. Ain’t bad though, right.

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I figured as much. I am not that good with my they’re and theirs.

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But the beginning was great! Just don't stop the story please! I just wish human vs ponies story would just continue!!

I'm curious to see how this one man will be the one to succeed where all the others failed over the thousands of years, what will be different this time.

'Every sapient being deserves freedom and to make their own choices!" - Optimus Prime

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I agree with writing anthro is better since well their anthros

So Luna is sympathetic to the humans and Celestia is looking a bit more like a villain. I wonder what the Main 6's stance is on slavery.

But, she stopped that line of thought as she approached the large golden doors that served as the entrance to the throne room. She shook the fatigue of the night from her form, and replaced it with grace that could only be acquired from years of practice. And as the doors swung inward, she walked through.

Heck yeah luna on the side of the humans.

She understands humans, since hey we may not be perfect and do some pretty mess up things but that doesn’t mean we’re bad people, we have our fair share of demons, but as there is darkness, there is light, which humans have both of

Hey author keep up the good work my friend, but I must ask, if we’re going to find out what happing in ponyville with the humans and the mane 6

Yeah I'm interested too about the main 6 on slavery. For all we know Applejack could have a whole farm of humans and could be treating them horribly or nice. Most other fanfics shows them being bad....

I wonder if they are successful in reaching freedom will they go for revenge or peace and how many humans to ponies there are because in less humans heavily out number the ponies they're probably going to need some extra help and if you need some inspiration there's a pretty good tv show called Spartacus

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Patients my friends, patients. It will be revealed all in due time. There are a few things I need to do first before I can show you that.

Also (just in case anyone is wondering), I am currently working on chapter 3, and it will probably be finished by the end of the week.

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Ah gotcha, and yes my lord, but you should probably run.

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Sooooooo how's the writing going

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That’s a fair question. Sorry for just going radio silent the past few… months. Life’s just been throwing a couple of curveballs in my way recently, and it doesn’t look like it’s going to stop soon.

Which is also kinda my fault. I put a lot of weight on my shoulders, thinking I could handle it. But, I’m gonna be honest, I really couldn’t. I’m just trying to get life stuff out of the way first right now, before I put more time into this. And I also have to finish off few other projects as well. I’ve got my hands full right now, but I am not abandoning this book.

If there is one thing I hate, it’s when thinks are left unfinished. I need to focus on life and my immediate future right now. But rest assure, as soon as I manage to wrangle everything back under control, I’ma coming straight back to this.

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It's all good just wanted to check in I wish you the best and hope to see a new chapter sometime this year ;)

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