A Murder Mystery in Equestria
Not a bad start. Need to cut down on the profanity. You don't have to curse every five words to be gritty.
Alright you have my attention, let's see where this story goes.
Not a bad start. Need to cut down on the profanity. You don't have to curse every five words to be gritty.
Alright you have my attention, let's see where this story goes.