When Equestria is in a state of turmoil, Rainbow Dash slowly discovers that she's not who she thinks she is and is plunged into an adventure that will change her life forever as well as question the very virtue she represents, Loyalty.
Nightmare Moon has brought oppression and eternal darkness to Equestria, but Rarity and Rainbow Dash may yet risk prominent positions in her service to fight for a better world...
Fame and glory, these things are all Spitfire has ever needed she was the Captain of the Wonderbolts. However with the Wonderbolts putting in new requirements and the appearance of an old friend. how will it affect her career as a Wonderbolt?
Okay going to the new information we got his mother and his grandma was raised in poverty with an abuse Grandpa also I wonder what personality that is dad had he might have got some of his emotional attitude. I'm trying to share my theory.
Part of my theory: 1: his mother has a blue coats 2: his mother has a stylized brownish orange mane that was short and kinda wavy.
No I know this is not enough Parts in my behalf but I believe Skyler might have some mommy issues. Taking me as you can see in part 1 it is mother has a blue coat and the wonderful uniform is blue at the same blue but close enough. Second part is the mother's hairstyle brownish orange with short and wavy like Spitfire hair is wavy like it's red but with orange just replace the brown. Also the suspect doesn't know about this because he's deeply in a illusion of grandeur with deadly tendencies.
yes I don't know why I'm so happy that his mom is on the kill list. Maybe it make the story unless terrifying if you didn't have his mom on the list. This reminds me of a Criminal Minds episode.
awesome chapter and story mate keep it up can't wait for the next story everybody knows in prison nobody likes rapist no surprise he end up dead i hope maybe you do a case like the SL-9 incidentSL-9 Incident
It was a great story through and through. I truly enjoyed reading this and the previous case and it always amazes me how wonderful the few FiM detective stories are. I do not know if they are anymore than this and the ones made by PonyJosiah but I felt that the amount of effort, details and plot is truly magnificent. Thank you and good luck with your next case.
Oh and I was wondering if you would make one side story involving Shadow creating a few practice cases to train Comet. You know the cliche 'Who stole Pinkie's cake' sort of story, to teach him a few detective methods.
10876587 Well, thank you for the comment. However, if I’m being honest, I’m not to big on the first case. I got a little sloppy toward the end. To me anyway.
I prefer this case over the first one. But, it’s good to know someone enjoys it.
Confess: The culprit is Lightning Dust.
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I will use my right to remain silent.
Corkscrew is Skyler Sheldon Storms just just disguise himself it look different
awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter
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I know I'm late to this never got the text notification but you plead the Fifth by all laws I have the right to respect your response
Okay going to the new information we got his mother and his grandma was raised in poverty with an abuse Grandpa also I wonder what personality that is dad had he might have got some of his emotional attitude. I'm trying to share my theory.
Part of my theory:
1: his mother has a blue coats
2: his mother has a stylized brownish orange mane that was short and kinda wavy.
No I know this is not enough Parts in my behalf but I believe Skyler might have some mommy issues. Taking me as you can see in part 1 it is mother has a blue coat and the wonderful uniform is blue at the same blue but close enough. Second part is the mother's hairstyle brownish orange with short and wavy like Spitfire hair is wavy like it's red but with orange just replace the brown. Also the suspect doesn't know about this because he's deeply in a illusion of grandeur with deadly tendencies.
awesome chapter mate keep it up can't wait for the next chapter
yes I don't know why I'm so happy that his mom is on the kill list. Maybe it make the story unless terrifying if you didn't have his mom on the list. This reminds me of a Criminal Minds episode.
Another case closed and now we just need to the post case chapter to see what happens next
awesome chapter and story mate keep it up can't wait for the next story everybody knows in prison nobody likes rapist no surprise he end up dead i hope maybe you do a case like the SL-9 incidentSL-9 Incident
It was a great story through and through. I truly enjoyed reading this and the previous case and it always amazes me how wonderful the few FiM detective stories are. I do not know if they are anymore than this and the ones made by PonyJosiah but I felt that the amount of effort, details and plot is truly magnificent. Thank you and good luck with your next case.
Oh and I was wondering if you would make one side story involving Shadow creating a few practice cases to train Comet. You know the cliche 'Who stole Pinkie's cake' sort of story, to teach him a few detective methods.
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Well, thank you for the comment. However, if I’m being honest, I’m not to big on the first case. I got a little sloppy toward the end. To me anyway.
I prefer this case over the first one. But, it’s good to know someone enjoys it.
Second case let's rock.
I like climate storm and I like that she won't help her son if he's the killer.
Well damn this case is getting crazy!
Stakers man.
Rip Gust gale