Twilight discovers a startling problem in the world and searches for answers. Not finding anything that can make the world make sense she goes to Princess Celestia for answers. The answer she gets isn't one she could have expected, but neither is her reaction to it.
Teen for somewhat darker themes. No violence, sex, or strong language at all, though.
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Heh.
Interesting concept, lovely execution. Well done.
:O
Delovely.
A few mechanical mistakes here and there that are noticeable, but not detractant. A beautiful story, with an amazing idea.Almost EqD worth, if you got somepony to proofread it. I'm still a bit unclear on the whole thing, but I also have a general idea. Have a friend read over it and just tell you what they don't get, then try to make it clearer.
Overall, I give you a 8/10 on the Golden
Scale
This is a really interesting story. Really glad i read this. Thumbs up.
Dun. Dun. Duuhhhhhh. Wait. What would that make Discord?
Thanks for the comments everyone!
I just did some small edits to correct a lot of the typos. Some I would have swore I had fixed already. *probably forgot to hit the save button*
Chaos, In my thought Discord is Celestia's guilt manifesting itself. Her fear and anxiety of what happened in one world bleeding through into another.
Luna has a different role. I'm debating writing a parallel story covering her side of things.
absolutely fantastic, the story was great but what really made it great to me was how Twilight dealt with the situation at the end, how she responded to Celestia was beautiful and amazingly in character, maybe, if this makes any sense at all, more in character with how I see her than the Twilight from the show.
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please see the fanfic titled Petriculture.
Shit, son.
This is genius. Time to quantasize magic!
This is freaking horrifying...and unimaginably sad. But it's a genius idea...despite it's tragedy, it is very well-written. I really liked it.
