What does it mean to be a brother?
What does it mean to be a sister?
Does it mean simply protecting the other, or is it something more?
Is it a blessing or a curse?
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its is a privilege and a gift
I usually don't rate fics until after 3 or 4 chapters, but you don't deserve to start out with a bad rating. I really liked this.
Only complaint I have is length, I think it would be better if it was a little more drawn out (of course that could just be the fact that I like long stories). Over all a good story. Keep up the good work.
"All the races to check his muscle strength, and the weight lifting to check his stamina had been quite taxing on him" i think you have stamina and strenght mixed up granted it does work but still