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Cpt Creampuff


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Twilight is excited that today is the grand reopening of her old home and surprisingly it also falls on the day of her anniversary with Rarity

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Leaving the shop Twilight made the journey to that same hill behind the castle. Pulling the flowers from behind her and getting them ready she noticed the tag around one of the stems




Twilight thought to herself it's been way longer than that”

Uhm... I think you lost some of the story here.

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Strange that wasn't there a day ago but thanks for telling me I've fixed it

Welp..... that happened.

Darn you, that was perfectly subtle and devastatingly sweet. Just enough said and left unsaid that I both never saw it coming and felt like I should have seen it coming.

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But was it a good happen or bad happen
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I love this so much

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Well I loved the story, and I wrote my comment to hopefully not spoil so others will as well. Bravo

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It was a ‘I’m not sure how to handle this’ happen.

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I guessed early on that Rarity was dead.

It wasn't thst hard to guess either. I've read way too many stories to know where this was heading, but whst really gave it away was this: The fact thst such a important occasion happened, (reopening the library) and only Applejack showed up? If it was that important, all of the Mane 6 would have shown up, or at least Rarity. So it was easy to tell that Applejack was the only one besides Twilight that was still alive.

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