Princess Luna, longing for some real company, decides to befriend a young, introverted stallion who she feels is very much like she is herself. Things seem to go well... but could anything go wrong from a Princess befriending a commoner?
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Well, what a surprise!
I guess Aversion's like a lost brother to Abstraction with such a cutie mark.
But, I think we can both agree his new state wouldn't be a reason Abstraction has a be jealous off or envy him.
Plot twist!
Not really a plottwist. As soon as the tear happened I knew what you were doing
awesome
You're the man Aversion! Or... Pony, stallion? Anyway, good for you!
it's about freaking time! we've waiting and expected this to happen, and finally, it did!
10078131
Yes, indeed.
They certainly are.
And yeah, Abstraction wouldn't be envious. In fact, I think he might remark "I definitely wouldn't want the pressure of ruling a kingdom based on my anatomy!"
10078136
You're not wrong there.
10078208
Yeah, not very subtle, this kind of trope.
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Thanks!
10081498
Good point
10079826
Yep, he's quite the lucky soul, isn't he?
10080976
Oh, I bet!
10081507
Give me more dude! ^^
I mean, it's been a roller coaster of emotions as I read though this story, it is super good. And sure, I could nit pick, but I won't, the story is carried very good, and I like to see the progression of of the characters. :3
What I would love to see more of, is him developing more, like, getting out of the shadow of his past, and get more confident, and, smarter? Not sure if that's the right word. But now that he is an Alicorn he probably had to learn a TON, and I would love to see him tackle this new lifestyle and see him get more mature as he is starting a whole new life.
At any rate, looking forward to reading more, super fun, can't wait!
10081500
Darn it.
10081503
welcome
thought
To the author - omg finally a story i can read that's been updated.
here's my reactions about this chapter...
yay! aversion's alive
wha...he's an alicorn!!! oh my freaking god blueblood's gonna die from shock & twilight is gonna be like "How is possible celestia?! there has never been a Male alicorn documented in the history books i've read or like ever!"
dude hope you're ready for the dislikes and what not
p.s: seriously you better know what're doing, man!
i would like you to know that i've deleted fimfiction from favs on google a couple days ago (thankfully i wrote down the username & password on a piece of paper! also my plan for moving to that 'other' laptop is happening real soon.)
lastly please respond to my double messages of January 19 in our pm's thread before i log out alright
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Ah, I should probably fix that!
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Yeah, glad you could get around to it.
I know it might not have been the best setup for the final part, but hey, why not take a chance? As for dislikes... my grandfather told me something interesting once: he said "If you don't have haters, you're doing something wrong." Besides, it seems like more people like than dislike, and that's all that matters to me. I appreciate your concern, though.
And yeah, I'll be sure to get back with you!
10088491
i'm not against the idea of this idea or concept! cannot wait for the conclusion of your story😍
p.s:here's the story that i mentioned by Crackedinkwell in our PM's conversation or on your user page?
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/416145/hello-my-name-is-air-marshal
First. The music choice is very fitting. Love Ace Attorney. Second.... AVEY IS A ALICORN?!?!?! Holy donk dood! That is awesome!