Princess Luna, longing for some real company, decides to befriend a young, introverted stallion who she feels is very much like she is herself. Things seem to go well... but could anything go wrong from a Princess befriending a commoner?
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Great work, good they still had control in their drunk state, if you get what I mean. As for Celestia, nothing a good talk between sisters can solve, given time
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Yep, it's good they could restrain themselves! And yes... I can imagine that a bit of explanation on both the Sisters' parts will help to reconcile the situation.
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Indeed
Just for once, I'd like to see someone actually have a spine when one of the princesses comes gunning for them, to flat out tell them, "No," stand by their rights, and refuse to be cowed by flashy regalia and vague threats.
If, for no other reason, so that Aversion can see by example what a person with guts and sense of self-worth looks like and know that he, too, could learn to stand up for himself.
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The problem is that if Aversion tries to stand up to his boss, he's probably going to risk losing his job. That would be, in his situation, as good as the final nail in his coffin. So, even if he does gain the will to stand up for himself, he's still going to play it safe with ponies who can make a major impact on his life.
But, when it comes to facing Luna, you just might be right about how Star Buck could react...
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Well, you said in the authors notes in the newest chapter that you played subnaughtica.... and also that crosscode is very emotional 😠it’s sad to be honest. Like this story a bit. The similarities between the two are too much of a coincidence. And this story kinda reminded me of that game.
The extra ‘still’ feels excessive.
Also, what is that about debit card fraud?
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Oh, my apologies. I misunderstood at first.
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Oh, I'll fix that.
As for my (old) debit card; I saw that I was getting charged for a Hulu account that I never created, through my debit card. So, I called up both Hulu and my bank, got everything cleared up, and got a new debit card with a different number. So, all is good now; I did not lose a lot of money, and it was all reimbursed. I've also applied for my first credit card.
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hey, it's tots fine. ^w^
i am finding this to be a interesting story.
this chapter is a bit out of caricature for Celestia, but i have followed this author enough to know there is a plan.
this is going to be good.
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Thank you for following my stories!
Now this is a great example of how to do conflict right.
*It is foreshadowed, no matter how subtly.
*There is logic behind the reason for the conflict.
*It produces an emotional response in the characters and reader.
*Not having the Idiot Ball in play. Smart, rational beings can still make poor choices, they just have to lack the full picture.
*And lastly, conflict does not have to be life and death, or apocalyptic. Small things can have big impact if handled well.
Writers take note of what was done here.
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Glad this scene was able to work out the way it did. I appreciate the breakdown and critique!