Princess Luna, longing for some real company, decides to befriend a young, introverted stallion who she feels is very much like she is herself. Things seem to go well... but could anything go wrong from a Princess befriending a commoner?
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Sounds like a very harsh life, but I'm sure Luna could help. Had to think of Abstraction as I read his name.
good, that probably means we don't have the reserve role thing happening this time.
Well I decited to give this still a chance after I noticed the chapter was short enough.
It's not that I dislike the idea and even if the "he is so sad" was nearly a bit to much at one little point in the chapter, I already like him.
I decited I have no choice but to try to see where this actually goes since I couldn't describe exactly what I expect is maybe going to happen in their relationship.
I guess as long as Luna is respecting him and not is the one who decite what they do and stuff all the time alone it won't feel to bad.
To many bad examples with princess x commoner stories.
I don't know if I change my mind, but I still wait for one story who does the romance in a way, where not both are in love with each other right away or directly in the moment when one of them is confessing their love.
I more or less want a "okay we can try it and see where it leads us, but I don't love you yet" kind of reaction for once.
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Thanks for your thoughts! I get that the setup might not be perfect, but I do plan to give this fic some good substance.
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Thanks! And yes, Luna will be of great help to him. And you're right; the names are pretty similar!
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Ishn't his situation familar to Klye too? Pretty sure he and Aversion would understand each other.
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Yep, he would. And in fact... he just might at some point...
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This is reminding me of Magic in The Stars. That remains my favorite OC/Luna ship fic. Haven't heard from the author in years...
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I like the comparison! And it's a shame (s)he's not been around, I assume.