Princess Luna, longing for some real company, decides to befriend a young, introverted stallion who she feels is very much like she is herself. Things seem to go well... but could anything go wrong from a Princess befriending a commoner?
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Very nice! I noticed at this senteanceThe [
Is the last word on purpose or a mistake with the italic setting?
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Bet I got a lot of you singing "A Whole New World" from Aladdin, didn't I?
You definitely succeeded in my case. Well done good sir and I hope to see more from you soon.
AWESOME!
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Oops! You're right! I'd better fix that!
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You're welcome.
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Ah, thank you for catching that for me!
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Thank you!
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Thanks! So are you!
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yes
I have read the chapter on my handy, I liked it.
I mean I couldn't decite if them nearly kissing came to soon, but then again both of them are kind of akward and probably got kind of drunk on the kindess they received.
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Thanks. And yeah, I'd say they are both a bit overwhelmed by the sudden turn of events, and their first friendship in a long time.
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That Does look like the face of mercy
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A lot of fans believe that Blueblood is biased towards commoners and views them as "worthless garbage," being the spoiled brat he is. He thinks extremely highly of himself, and believes that he is the center of their universe. And just so you know, he will be forced (by his aunts or otherwise) to explain his actions, to which he will give an honest opinion about Aversion, despite it being an insulting one.
Also... why are you only offering harsh criticism instead of constructive criticism? If you don't like this, you don't have to read it. But don't go ruining it for me and everyone else. You need to understand character tendencies instead of just judging them on the surface.
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Also, Blueblood will not be the main villain. In fact, the main antagonist is a character that we've only seen a "glance" of so far, and he/she, or it, is not even a pony.
And I get that Blueblood is a bit shallow; he hasn't had a lot of page-time in the story yet. I still need time to flesh him out for the story.
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Perhaps... and I will reveal Blueblood's motive for his grudge against Aversion, and his character will become more prominent as the story goes on. Right now, he sees it as "A lowly commoner in the company of royalty!? I cannot let this be; he is not worthy! Subjects and royalty do not go together! So I will punish him myself for it!"
In any case, it goes against everything he believes to see Luna flying with a commoner on her back. Only very high-ranking ponies, foreign diplomats, or any pony requested by either of the Princesses for an audience, are permitted in Canterlot Castle, from what Blueblood has been taught. He thinks Aversion is violating royal law/ordinance and might have an ulterior motive, since neither Luna nor Celestia have ever flown anypony on their back.
You've only been together for two days!
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Let's not forget, they've both been fairly isolated from any visitors for a good long while. It's just their subconscious telling them "Oh, I'm with somepony of opposite gender, completely alone!" You'd be surprised at how the human mind works in those situations, which I assume would also apply to Equestrian ponies, with their human-level sentience and intelligence.
Missed opportunity there; "Romantic Flight" by John Powell
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Figures, given I don't know the song.
What can I say? I'm uncultured!