Princess Luna, longing for some real company, decides to befriend a young, introverted stallion who she feels is very much like she is herself. Things seem to go well... but could anything go wrong from a Princess befriending a commoner?
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Serves her right! Who doesn't want to listen, pays the price! And do you really think it will be that easy, Blueblood?
So where’s the ethics part
‘(...) took it’ ?
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I must admit I do too,
Because being undeniably the most moral ethical person is what can make this guy likeable.
He’s an Everyman a world hates him guy, and at that point he deserves the power,it’s just that he is using it to give everyone whoever wronged him a bloody nose.
But at the same time the moral singularity (where this person becomes unfixably awful) hasn’t been reached yet. So if this guy acts nice and has a bit of empathy, he could become extremely normal.
(If the authors intention was to make him seem awful pls ignore all above)
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Of course, it doesn’t change a story depending on the likability of the main character and good stories can have an absolute jackass for the main role (Brooklyn 99 amazing world of gumbo etc)
But the quality of the main characters does require work on the way the plot will go now.if this is unpunished revenge, then star needs to have done something horrible like stole his computer cheated on his wife and punched him while she turned on the light for this level of revenge to work. As far as I see the guy was treated like a Starbucks employee so why shut down the restaurant steal the money and ask for apology
Feel free to clarify if I misread or misunderstood any part of this
*looks at amount written *
What the fuck? I write 10 word comments, how much is this?
Sorry,
WARGAMES
9689375
Yeah, especially after the way she has treated so many employees and favored others!
And it seems Blueblood never learns. As Albert Einstein once said, the true definition of insanity is doing the same thing over and over and expecting different results.
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It has to do with the recollection of how Star Buck has treated many of her employees in the past. Some have received favoritism, others have been treated poorly. This goes against Equestria's ethical labor laws in this story, which say that all employees must be treated equal.
9689709
Thanks. I'll fix that.
Geez, I have such a problem with proofreading!
9690513
Indeed and don't forget Sin zhu
I am wondering how Blueblood will enjoy being a ferret the rest of his life after Discord find out he is still being shifty.
9690800
Oh, he's gonna end up feeling the backlash of it all in the end!
9690527
I’m sorry,
Pardon me but it’s actually Sun Tzu
Terribly sorry for my interruption
9691209
It's fine
To the author - I read this about a week or last weekend ago but didn't comment/review…in chapter 22 you commented to me that the next one was in process (don't remember what day/month that was?) & dude ya absolutely delivered with this chapter!
aversion and luna celebrate by having an impromptu party in celestia's garden with the other/former sacked employees of that restaurant/café or alone at their private cave to this song (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Tazs-98Vp6c)
the end with blueblood and aversion's bully team up reminds of episode the Simpsons clip show of musical numbers, where snake jumps in through the window of their home and the family sings 'oh no' while huddled together in a corner.
p.s: by the way if you're curious where that song is from...it's called Six the musical. check it out and highly i recommend it!
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Thank you for your thoughts! Yep, it seems like things are only going to get better for Aversion! ...Or are they?
As for Blueblood... yeah, that little brat is just willing to go to any length to get what he wants, but never thinks things through. And anything he does is only going to come back and bite him in his Bluebutt later!
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Oh of course just when you think it's all going to be happy, sunshine & flowers... then bam! the unexpected twist happens.
blueblood's never gonna change...like at all in this story
p.s: i have idea you could use (just please credit me for it) What if one of luna's bat pony guards was secretly hiding somewhere then let's the plan go on but a clone or changeling takes aversion's place.
here's two questions -
1. what season does this au take place in? i don't think anyone has asked this of you before.
2. do you have something already written/planned out?
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Season-wise... I would say before Season 6, though I never thought of a specific time.
As for my writing, I always plan ahead.
When new chapter?
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It'll come. Just be patient. I've had a lot on my plate recently.