Princess Luna, longing for some real company, decides to befriend a young, introverted stallion who she feels is very much like she is herself. Things seem to go well... but could anything go wrong from a Princess befriending a commoner?
Page generated in 0.03 seconds
Total duration
901 users online
1,362,630 hits today, 2,020,241 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Oh dear...Frankly, I think Luna will change back once seeing how AVerision is terrified of her. But the struggle is understandable. I can also understand Celestia's fears but I think she's a bit too worried about it
9360417
Indeed. I guarantee this won't come without disaster. And yes, I am purposefully trying to exaggerate Celestia's paranoia, all to show that she is a "bossy older sister," which I think is one of the reasons for Luna's first descent into darkness.
9360424
Good thought. Frankly, I think Aversion would be scared to death upon seeing NIghtmare moon eye to eye
O this is going to be a real ass kicking.
and Celestia has suck a wide ass.
9360781
Definitely. Only when it's always too late do they realize... they done f***ed up!
I see this a lot in fics. Does Celestia not have flunkies or secretaries or a Ministry of Intelligence to look stuff up for her? Does she really need to dragoon a half-dozen national heroes into helping her waste an entire day digging up dirt on some random guy? It's not just this fic; Celestia seems to spend an awful lot of time in fics going to a place to do a thing when she could send a message to have the people already at that place do the thing for her and report back.
I would love to see these idiots run off together. They haven't a single life skill between the two of them and wouldn't last five minutes if they had to rely on their own abilities. Luna seriously needs to get her head out of the clouds and stop being so dependent on her sister. I guess we'll see if her dark side has any bright ideas.
Seriously, Celestia? Luna's already committed treason, had a thousand years of having her name dragged through the mud, and then came back and committed treason again. Her reputation's already shot to Tartarus. Embezzling state funds to support the Least Interesting Stallion in the World as her secret lover would at least be a normal vice.
9360808
witch makes it so much sweeter.
now i am wondering how many have figured out who the hero will be in the end.
9361065
Yeah, I could see where you're coming from in that regard. I just couldn't think of anything else.
Next chapter please!
9367297
It's coming soon! I promise!
9360808
Awesome!
9372977
Thank you!
9373085
welcome
Luna!! Don't do this!! You have come so far. I know Celestia is being a plothole but don't turn to Nightmare Moon!
10038628
Sometimes, one simply can't control how emotional they get...