Shameful past that I won't delete because nostalgia
Ponies have only two forms of sending messages. Either using the convectional postal service, which is unreliable and there is the chance of it being intercepted by enemies or you can contact the Palladium Couriers, a secret and forbidden organisations of courier ponies who's highest priority is to send the information to the client, no matter how hard the conditions they may seem to be, they never fail.
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I'm fully aware of possible grammatical mistakes, please keep in mind that English is not my first language and I'm doing this to practice, please don't be to hard on your critics, but if you think something is important, comment please.
You have my attention.
Amuse me.
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For a guy who knows English as a second language, this is very well done. Only error I can find is an accidental double space between "Her and "With" (The colt approached her with a smile on his face...). Besides that, I give you my highest rating so far, the mustache:
Keep it up, and this could be great.
Is not a mistake that the descriptions of time are so vague, it's purposely made. The reason of this is because of the nature of cartoon characters, which all of them are ageless and their real age are never specified on the show. Said this why should I be different when it comes to write about a story settled in a timeless universe?