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The Crystal king
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Ceasefire, not seize-fire.
There's so much wrong here, I don't know where to begin.
A gross underestimation of US military power, overestimation of Mexican military power, multiple spelling and grammar errors. Mexican could never go toe-to-toe with America militarily in any aspects, much less be any form of threat to them. Not to mention how you wrote that a thrown spear was able to kill a US soldiers, implying that a spear was able to pierce US Military-grade bullet-resistant armor AND still have enough kinetic energy left to pierce the ribcage, and embed itself so deep in the wall behind the soldier that it held him in the air. Story is unrealistic and fairly insulting to US military might.
Only good part about the story was that Trump built the border wall.
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Fixed. Thanks for commenting!
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Please I would love to hear your opinion. I mean you do "give the truth, no matter how bad it hurts." Do you not? Also thanks for commenting!!
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The Khan 9295002 pretty much sums it up. I'm not sure what reality you're living in, but it can't be this one.