More plz

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Rest assured, more will come. I have other commitments, but this will have a top spot in my writing cue for the foreseeable future. But thoughtful commentary from my readers will help me keep on top of any bad habits in writing, or issues I will want to address.

Now this, is an interesting story, lookin forward to future updates!

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I'm glad it entertains you so far. I can't wait to hear the thoughts of readers as I get further into this.

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Finally! You have no idea how long I've been waiting for constructive criticism like this. I'd love to hear more of your thoughts because I don't think I understand what you mean. If you're worried about this story getting dropped then rest assured that isn't happening. I have the plot for over 30 chapters planned for this story.

If you would like to discuss this more I'd love to move this conversation over to the PMs. Also, thank you for the Favorite!

Yeah, the protagonist vault gets ripped with lead in the very first chapter of the story, oh my. I expected that cliche, but I didn't think it would be that soon.

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Kinda wanted the Reader to know right off the bat just the sort of tone I was setting up for this. Don't worry, reasons will be provided in later chapters. Besides, when your protagonist starts their journey at rock bottom it gives readers hope that things can only go uphill from there.

Thanks for the feedback! I appreciate it!