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Sidetracked

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Rarity's horn has been known to do some very strange things without Rarity's permission. When she's called on a friendship mission, she doesn't know what to expect. Her horn, on the other hoof, has plans of its own.

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Ri2

Ri2 #1 · Jun 29th, 2018 · 2 · ·

So...the map sent them there so Rarity could strike it rich?

AdverseFlower95

AdverseFlower95 #2 · Jun 29th, 2018 · 2 · ·

Yeah, I don't really get the point of this story, you need to put in a lot more to make this an engaging story. Maybe, at the beginning, add the placing of the order which is stressing Rarity and what it entails how just having more gems can fix the situation, and then actually have there be a friendship problem that they need to fix. At that point have her be dragged off and when it stops have there be some drama about them being dragged away to then find the solution to both her work situation and the friendship problem. Since this is a comedy, you can have Rarity bash into things as she's being dragged, and have her really ham it up about the drama so you don't need to add the tag.

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