This was one of the odder scenarios I've landed myself in, but ranks among one of my favourites.
Since my experience with the Tegmen I've had a lot off day dreams about other ways it could have gone... Less possible, but interesting in their own right. If there's demand, I may write them down and add bonus chapters to this tale – let me know!

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This was interesting. I'd love to see more, even just Withania puttering around in her (or their, now) garden.

Very interesting and relaxed little story, I greatly enjoyed it. The pacing was good, although it would have been nicer to spin it out into a more full story, rather than just documenting the event.

The biggest thing I found to be missing was any description of the protagonist (except for the little bit at the end). A good thought process, when writing, is to imagine that every character is a naked, featureless blob of putty until you describe them to the reader.

The sexual nature of the plant came a little out of left field. I assumed it would have done exactly what it did to the bee to the mouse to her.

Pretty good for your third story. You have my watch.

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Many thanks! Yes the 'documentary' section of this story was a bit of an experiment to try and cut down the first sequence, but given that I chaptered out this story anyway, I might as well have narrated in the end!

Additionally, I try not to pull too much focus as I fear that most people are more interested in the story than Withania as a character... I should have more faith that people have come here to read about my adventure, so to heck with modesty, I'll tell more about myself next time! :P

8969631 Great to hear. Even a porny clopfic can have good characterization, descriptions, story, and pacing. Looking forward to more!

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The fact that you also made a fanfic revolving around your character honestly gives me the courage to do something similar. Thanks. <3

Also this was really hot!

I've never read anything that came close to this kind of uniqueness. Great story.

This was amazing.

I am going to read this out of pure curiosity. I expect weird. 'Tis not a bad thing.
Edit: Fuck. New fetish.

I want one

That was a nice story. I would enjoy a sequel to this where the tegman is put into spas as a way of massaging ponies and making them feel great.

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I'm sure some ponies might be good money for this

THANK YOU to everyone for their kind words, and also the feature box – was not expecting so many people to love a story for a more specific audience <3

Keep an eye on my blog for hints on up coming stories! I plan to write more!

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I really appreciated how well-written this was overall. Your use of descriptive prose is great, and you have a knack for making the reader forget they are reading and engage their imagination, bringing them into the character's experience more vividly. This story is something I'm taking lots of mental notes from to help with my own writing.

This is beautiful

Ha. Now that the story has crossed 100 upvotes, I went to add it to HQMF only to find it is already there. Yep. Definitely belongs there.

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Ma'am I may be the spirit of vengeance. but that was the best story I have ever seen and read. you have the abilities of a goddess.
MY regards the ghost rider.

Good story!

Maybe she could open an business with renting the plant to other individuals...

I actually find myself delighted to have read this. The prose of it is almost lyrical, the imagery is sparkly as a diamond just after being polished, and the flow of the story itself is as smooth and beautiful as a mountain stream as it trickles amongst the trees. Truly, one of the finest works I've read, despite being so short as it was. I especially loved the descriptions of what happened as you interacted with the Magnus Tegman.
...Would you, perchance, be willing to bequeath the use of it to me? Not for myself, but for the characters of my own story? You see, it's a crossover fanfiction where Twilight Sparkle meets someone from another world who is very much like her and, well, they're both very inquisitive about rare and exotic things, and this sounds like something they might enjoy indulging once in a while, especially Twilight–imagine how good she'd feel taking the occasional weekend to enjoy this sort of scenario with the Tegman?

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Thanks for the kind words
Sure thing, I'd appreciate it if they mention where they got it from - I have a business to run!
Be aware that the Tegmen will be making another appearance in my stories soon, and in more detail. But I have no problem with 'non-canon' use, if you see what I mean!

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Non-canon use? Just looking for clarification.
Edit: never mind, I get it. XD would you like to have your “character self” introduced as the person who tells Twilight about it? I’d still mention the Magnus Tegmen is yours either way.

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Recent discoveries concerning the Tegmen had reveal "long term effects" which mean you don't want people to use this thing more than one or two times tops. But when I say 'non-canon' you can use it for simple fun times and not worry about said side-effects.
But yes, so long as someone says they got it from Withania that's fine, I appreciate the networking

Quite the interesting story here, I approve of it.

One of the only plant type stories of this caliber I read that I can think of off the top of my head, nicely done.

Nice stuff Withania.

Hehe, more science needs to be done!