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Breakups are hard. Vinyl took hers harder than she had ever taken anything in her life. Her friends are unsure about how they can cheer her up.

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Grif_Bladefeather

Grif_Bladefeather #1 · Jun 22nd, 2018 · · ·

your only issue is lack of a resolution, the story is well done, well paced, well represented, you just need to add some way this resolves, either vinyl moving on, or Octavia coming back, or something like that.

ClockyTalky

ClockyTalky #2 · Jun 22nd, 2018 · · ·

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I kind of wanted to leave that up to the readers imagination, but I guess I could do that with a different story if I were to work on one.
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