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Twilight is informed of the emergence of demonic pony-like creatures from the Everfree, and decides to investigate herself. Once there, the princess of friendship encounters one of such creatures, who simply wants redemption for all the pain and suffering he has caused. Twilight agrees to be his 'tether' as the unicorn leads him through the long, painful path of redemption for his past sins.

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EverfreePony #1 · Jan 14th, 2019 · 1 · · Chapter One ·

Interesting beginning. Could be a little longer in some spots to hold the tense atmosphere for a bit longer, but I think you still did rather well with the pacing. Noticed a few random grammar mishaps, as well as the recurring incorrect use of non-capitalized “I” and a few issues in direct speech. Nothing a good editor couldn’t easily fix though. And yay for Fluttershy and her Stare!