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Prince Polaris


[COMMISSIONS OPEN] I've written stuff with ponies, I've written stuff with PokΓ©mon, I've written stuff with SCP-1471, and you can find my big dumb self at Prince_Polaris on nearly everything! πŸ’™

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Oh, hi!

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Silverwing is an UnderWorld guardspony, and just like everypony else in (and under) equestria, he is getting ready to be evacuated to outer space!

Well, until he got left behind by the rest of the guards he was with, in the deeper, unsafe reaches of the UnderWorld.

Little did Silver know, he would become the key to saving the entire population of the UnderWorld. Him, and what he finds behind what was once an Equestrian Embassy.

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Welcome to my first real story! And it is now DONE! I'm sure it's a bit rocky, but I haven't managed to finish one of these yet! But I have plenty of ideas for what more I can do in this universe I'm putting together :D

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And finally, I'll post my inspiration! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tNXVC692jrk

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Oh yeah, you know what else is a work in progress? A minecraft map of this story's setting! It's not finished either, but if you wanna explore it, here's my MC server discord: https://discord.gg/cnMG7uK

The map in question is the UnderWorld map, a recreation of the entire place in minecraft, and it's pretty slow going so this story is probably gonna be finished before the map is, but eeyyyy it's something!

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 11 )

Interesting setup. There can never be too many robot ponies. :twilightsmile:

it's done and ahm gonna go over it now yeehaw

This was nice.
Is this a one shot or are there going to be other stories from here?

I like the start so far, looking forward to seeing where the story goes.

[Kerbal Space Program theme intensifies] :rainbowlaugh:

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I think so! The idea I'm currently thinking of is exploring exactly what (or who!) is behind the destruction of the tree and the heart, and also where discord went


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Yeeeeesssss <3

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I want that game, heh

Hmm, you should try to keep it at one speaker per paragraph. New speaker, new line.

is this even good? no idea lmao

Hell yes it is.

YO! This is a great story! Some small errors, some small things I’d change (mainly the β€œeach speaker onw line” rule), but it was fairly easy to read and very interesting.

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